Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By and large, managment and increasing the wokers efficiency is among the important factors which is indispensable for companies progress. especially, in the acurent era wich firs are encounter with a tremendouse competion to achiving more benefits.A plethora of company managers are of the conviction that doing simillar task is make workers more satisfied than the time they have to do simmilar work all they long. Others, on the other hand have a totally different point of view. By considerating different aspect of these two policy, I am of the opinion the later proposal is more benefecial for bothe workers and companies. In the following paragraph I will explain more about my standpoint.
The first and most exquisite point which come to my mind to substantiate my point of view is that doing simmilar work provided this ability to worker to manage their works and tasks. In fact, when employees are aware about the task that they are going to do in the next day, the have more time to thing about those works and make a design for doing them priorly.In this condition, when they want to start they work-day it is nor required await ro some one say that what the should. As a result, the start their thask very soon and this provided more time to acomplishment a lot of work which in turn satisfied they employeer and bing about reward for workers which make them happy.
The other equally important reason, if not more,is that working on the specific task every day increased workers skills. In this circumstance, the its prevented employreers from attrifuting differnct person for doing one task.Consequently, the accuracy will be increased and since it is crystal clear the who work with a specific machine, the workers will struggle to keep that machine in better way. SO, it increased the machine life time and which in turn producted more that is beneficial for company.So, this relased the worker form every day fine because of dmage wich occured in machine. A survey which conducted recently,approved this opinion and demonstrated that the workers who doing one job during the day are more happy and successful that those one have to doind different works.
To make a long story short, by considering all the aforementioned reasons and concidering this fact that doing a work all day long may be borin,I am of the opinion that working on one specified work during the work day is more beneficial for both workers and employeers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, so, in fact, as a result, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88701923077 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76492783853 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485576923077 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.4611071892 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.384615385 100.406767564 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.6045352989 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321299712793 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119034552007 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937005616592 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207606384024 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328150783317 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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