Write a narrative essay about an interesting place I have been visited.
It was the most memorable moment when my mother offered me the opportunity to visit my hometown. Binh Dinh was a peaceful land and an unforgettable childhood for me. The difference in geographical distance faced a dilemma when I intended to return, partially because I have been preoccupied with pursuing education in Can Tho.
I was apprehensive about boarding the bus because of my motion sickness, but listening to catchy songs made it less tedious and eased exhaustion. After arriving at Binh Dinh, I stayed at the bus terminal for a while, as soon as my aunt came and picked me up. After sleeping well in her house, I saw my relatives and neighbors, they were astonished by my peculiar appearance.
I helped harvest cashews on high mountains, so I dressed in farming clothes and brought some fast food. For most people, farming is arduous and tiring labor, but city dwellers should experience the manual job for the meaningful and simple meals on the mountain, also getting more cheerful conversations with inhabitants. Each summer, they gathered their family members to collect cashews because cashews harvest has been the major source of financing.
How can I convey the nature’s beauty of my countryside? Majestic mountains, diverse flora have created a picture of a realistic village. Moreover, the preservation of traditional and rustic charm was demonstrated by the rural lad herding cows through the fields every time the sunsets. On the Tet holiday, the most beautiful time of the year, everyone dressed up well and gave lucky money to children, the hamlet was bustling with people going to pagodas, and a few people gathered to play games all over the alleyways. I did not have such a meaningful Tet when I moved into the city. After two months, I had to leave and say goodbye to my beloved grandma, and I could not stop weeping.
To sum up, I believe all destinations create unforgettable memories, and I wish to travel to more places in Vietnam in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...onished by my peculiar appearance. I helped harvest cashews on high mountains...
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... grandma, and I could not stop weeping. To sum up, I believe all destinations cr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82250205618 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622023809524 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.599085318 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0838442654074 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259412655789 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275242564637 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0445750884028 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312188230973 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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