Yong can not give enough time to their communities
Generally, there are many issues in the society. Community work is volunteer work. Some people feel pleasure to do it, while some people do not considered it an important. Although, the plethora of people holds the opinion that young people do to spend their time to help society, I believe that young people do it very enthusiastically. I feel this way because of following reasons which i will explore in following essay.
First of all, now all youngsters are well -educated. They understand the needs of communities. They do have desire to help them in all way. Some people like to spend their extra time in communities. For example, an individual goes in old age home in every weekend to spend quality time with them. In old age home people feel home- sickness, so it will help them to come over from their pain. However, there are some people who do not like to talk with or spend time with unknown person. In busy life everybody could not give their time to do these activities.
The second and equally exquisite proof for this assertion is that new technology is being useful for young people to help their communities. In modern era students can find very easy way to solve any difficulties. They also want to help to needy people by this. For example, one of my friends has developed the electric handicap chair, which is easy to use for handicap people. So, he donates this chair in trust for handicap people, and try to make another chairs for them. Hence, he makes the good equipment, which helped them feel comfortable and do things by themselves.
Thirdly, young people who are wealthy, they run the charitable trust. By this trust old age people or handicap people can live in that. They also provide all kinds of facilities like good food, spacious room and medical care. To illustrate this one research has been says that majority of trust are owned by the young people, and they are well structured. Therefore, it can be said that even if young people cannot give personal attention to their community, so they do this by this way.
By the way of conclusion, based on arguments mentioned above, I believe that young people can give their enough time their community by spend some time with them, by gifting important things and by giving the place for live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, for example, i feel, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47337825656 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7535448823 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.68 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19688721538 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577435605952 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969518500181 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153327175817 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147620639287 0.0645574589148 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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