Young people enjoy life more than older people. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that young people enjoy life more than older people while others refute the claim. Personally, I believe that younger ones enjoy their life more than older ones for three reasons: they have more energy to make their life beautiful, are healthy` and are free from responsibilities.
First of all, young people have more energy to make their life beautiful. Young people have lot of guts and stamina to live the way as they like. They have time to do hard work to make everything worthwhile enough for their present and future. They are motivated to do the things from which they gain happiness. Success and happiness are the greatest joy of our life. Young people can achieve success through their determination to do something and happiness by achieving the success. Old people can just remember their past and enjoy their memories whereas young people can explore their life now and enjoy the moment.
Next, young people are less prone to diseases. They are healthy enough to experience new things in their life. Young people can taste new foods, places, technologies and so on. For instance, when I was 15 years old I used to live with my grandfather. He was suffering from diabetes, high blood pressure and hearing loss. He was neither able to eat the food he liked nor travel around and have conversation with people. Enjoyment had already came to an end in his life. But for me the enjoyment was just the beginning. I was able to eat my favorite food and travel beautiful places. So, I believe young people enjoy their life more than old people.
Finally, young people are free from responsibilities. They don’t have burden in their life. They don’t have to take big decisions in their life such as financial decisions, family decisions and societal decisions. For example, a child has no need to think about funding his study or supporting his family. He can just live in his own environment and feel the pleasure of his own environment. Young people are fee from tensions and pressures. Their responsibility is just to focus on study. Besides, they can live their life with full of joy and happiness.
In conclusion, young people enjoy their life more than old people because they have energy to bright their life, are less prone to diseases and are free from responsibilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: come
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Suggestion:
...el the pleasure of his own environment. Young people are fee from tensions and p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, if, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62673364075 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464646464646 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2643197152 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4285714286 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17857142857 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339848736849 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108748999814 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115239897196 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246334275776 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946931231852 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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