It is hard to say that people enjoy more in a certain period of their life. Every period of our life have a different beauty so; it is natural that people have different opinions on this issue. I am of the opinion that young people enjoy life more than older people. I support my opinion with three main arguments in the following essay.
First of all, young people are less responsible for the life rather than older people. The foremost responsibility of them is preparing for their future career. They do not have to earn money for a living as an older one. So, they have a lot of time to make real their hobbies or spend more time for themselves. On the other hand, older people are responsible for their families and work hard to provide good living standards for them. So, they cannot find leisure time to enjoy as much as a younger one.
Secondly, they are more resistant against illness considering their metabolism is stronger and fresher than an older one. In contrast, older people are sensitive for many diseases since their body resistance gets weak when they get older. Therefore, many ailments start to occur. Since they struggle with this, they do not derive pleasure in life as much as a young one.
Last but not least, young people have more desire for life. When people are young, they are willing to try various activities to have fun. Moreover, they have enough energy to realize them. They can travel around the world without being tired. On the contrary, as people get older, their desires about life decrease.
All in all, I strongly believe that young people enjoy more than older people. This is because they are healthier, more energetic and have more interests in life rather than old people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in contrast, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72607260726 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25980323725 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498349834983 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5025930928 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.1904761905 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375399509271 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133596597923 0.076458572812 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120403337915 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245683489329 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502099246951 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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