young people enjoy more life than older people.
The best gift God could give us is the gift of life. There are billions of species on the earth, but we believe that humans are the most superior among them. Some people believe that young people enjoy life more than older people do; others disagree. In my view, I believe that the young population is not enjoying life better than the older population.
First of all, older people have much experience in life than youngsters. They knew that the small matters that had given them anxiety in previous years did not matter as much as they thought it would. They try to avoid worrying about insignificant problems and situations, but on the other hand young people do not have that and they often worry about small things and ended up wasting their precious time, instead of enjoying and appreciating it. For instance, last weekend I forgot my house keys. I and my grandmother were locked outside of our house. I was worried tremendously because my parents were out of the city that day. I thought that we have to stay outside our house for the whole night and I thought that there is no solution. However, my grandmother, on the other hand, knew that it is not that big of a deal and we would eventually solve the problem. That was true because we found one key maker in the market and after only an hour we could enter the house. At that moment I was so disturbed by the circumstances but my grandmother was calm and composed. Because she did not worry about small problems, she could enjoy her life way better than I can.
Secondly, older people do not have to worry about the future, and they in fact, aware of the fact that they will not live as much as they have lived. As a result, they choose to celebrate the life that has been remaining. For instance, as I mentioned earlier my grandmother is living her life greatly. Once I had asked her about it and she replied that she does not want to waste her little left her life and wants to enjoy every last bit of it.
In conclusion, I disagree with the statement that young people enjoy more life than older people because an older person knows that little problems do not harm as much as they used to think. Also, they are aware of the fact that they might have not much time left to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 631, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... parents were out of the city that day. I thought that we have to stay outside ou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41927710843 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2599712121 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465060240964 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0394684272 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7619047619 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377464202375 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120985509263 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.197863996465 0.0737576698707 268% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308164605704 0.150856017488 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17083270706 0.0645574589148 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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