Some people like to spend their leisure time doing activites with a lot of people. Others prefer to spend their leisure in quite ways by themselves or with one other person. Which do you prefer?
In today's fast paced modern world, it is critically important to have some leisure time for yourself. Because nowadays, we have tremendous amount of work to do; whether you are in school or working. Some people loves to spend their free time with a large group of people, however I prefer to spend my leisure time by myself or with my one best friend only. I will explore my reasons in the following text.
First of all, I am most of the time surrounded by people and I get a very little time for myself. Because I am studying in college right now, I have academic classes and extracurricular five days a week. And during weekend I am also working in a cafe. There are always people in my class and at my work place. So, I am almost never alone because of that I enjoy my little time with myself only.
Moreover, my majority hobbies are more fun when I do it by myself or with my one friend only. For instance, I love to read. And in my personal experience when I read my favorite book: Harry potter and the social stone, I don’t enjoy more than one person's company. Because I like to read in quieter environment and sometimes other people starts to talk while we are reading. I also enjoy watching movies in my leisure time. But if we are watching movies with a large group of people there is a chance of conflict, also. For instance, last week we decided to watch a movie with a bunch of friends. But we spent most of our time fighting over which movie to watch. So if I was watching movie alone this would have not been occurred and I would have enjoyed my time with a movie that I really wanted to watch.
To sum up, I prefer to spend my leisure time mostly alone or with one friend because majority of the time I have to spend with people and in my view my hobbies are best enjoyed by myself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 513, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...f people there is a chance of conflict, also. For instance, last week we decided to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, while, for instance, first of all, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25872093023 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2898693314 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46511627907 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3501983162 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1052631579 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1052631579 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284250904893 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867012008581 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918499005343 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209304468662 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967890912215 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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