young people have a better life today then their parents enjoyed when they were young.
My generation grew up in calm, peaceful and pleasant time, however I can not say same about years of parents, when they were young. Those reasons I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, when my parents were twenty years old the nineties came up. It was a really crazy time in Russia. USSR crushed up and everybody survived as he or she can. Absolute disorder replaced elaborately developed cultural education. Factories and plans were broken and pieces of its details were stolen. Someone had become rich immediately due to previous government properties, but my parents were twenty and just got married. This is how youth of my parents was began. My mom started her work as an engineer and my dad did a lot of different attempts to earn money. Mid-level families did not got money at all. It was impossible. For instance, one day my mother got the big elk toy instead of the salary. This is because government did not have opportunities to pay salaries. All of above illustrate how time were hard when my parents were young.
On the other hand, the generation of mine has tremendously different conditions comparing with the generation of ancestors. The government elaborated almost sustainable policy. Young specialists go working everyday with confidence that every fifteen days employers pay stable amount of money. We can afford travelling once a year, bay various goods and live beautiful life, not just struggle for survival.
To sum it up, two different pictures of how life is going allow me to claim with confidence that young people have a better life today then their parents enjoyed when they were young.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'begun'.
Suggestion: begun
...ed. This is how youth of my parents was began. My mom started her work as an engineer...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
... earn money. Mid-level families did not got money at all. It was impossible. For in...
^^^
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...le policy. Young specialists go working everyday with confidence that every fifteen days...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to travel'.
Suggestion: to travel
...y stable amount of money. We can afford travelling once a year, bay various goods and live...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, then, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 277.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93501805054 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6507292431 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653429602888 0.524837075471 125% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0518885587 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.35 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.85 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342938219017 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782287660439 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148013551073 0.0737576698707 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251949550398 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.233013820723 0.0645574589148 361% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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