Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
As everything in life is like a coint people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping to conclusions. After all, each and every topic and question requires a careful deliberation in that there are multiple variables to a truth. Even though some may adamantly believe Young individuals have a big impact on the decisions that effect the future of soceity, I strongly belive this opinion lacks coherence to some extent. In my humble opinion, Young people actions don't effect the important decisions in today society for the following reasons and details.
First and foremost, the majority of individuals would agree with notion that with the rapid development of the sociey and economy people become more busy in their lives. The main reason behind this rationale is that in the last decade the people's standard of life increased therein lies the proplem. people have to work almost to cover life requiremnt costs. Therefore, young people these days are more concernd about how to earn money to take care of their families as well as paying for the schools and universities. To illustrate more thoroughly, Last year my brother ahmad was working at delivery company called Aramex. In fact, he had to work 10 hours every day in order to take care of his family. Thus, most young people are just busy in their life and cant influence other people to determine the future of the society.
On top of this, young people in todays world don't have the enough experience to contribute in determining the future of sociey. In the eyes of many people in present day society, most people didn't have a community issues to solve, therin lies the problem. A great example of this would be people in the past were living in small communities, whereby all individuals were sitting every friday to discuss and talk about their problems. Therefore, Young people were have a good characetristic in order to make decisions, shaped by the village meeting evey. In contrast, people now are just busy in developing their skills and knowledge, so they can have a job. Long story short, it's clear as day to me having a busy life that effect on our presonalities can be detrimental.
In summation, yes, it's virtually impossible to provide a completely satisfying answer to an open ended question. Although the jury may be out in this given essay, we can come to a mutual agreemet that young people today have are not influential in order to contribute in important decisions for the following reasons and details mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, after all, in contrast, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88524590164 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59809230783 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552693208431 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1974898851 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.789473684 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4736842105 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336272446151 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997564796196 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967302893596 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200605105582 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363617253951 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.