Younger people enjoy life more
People are so busy nowadays that sometimes they simply forget to enjoy the moments of their lives. Some people think that when you are young, you do not have a lot of responsibilities, there are no real difficulties, so you can enjoy every single day of your life. As you get older, your life becomes harder, and you do not have time to do what you like. I do not agree with such opinion and I think that the age does not matter. i feel this way for two main reasons, which I want to explore in this essay.
First, older people have more money to do whatever they want and when they want. If you are a student, you cannot afford travelling a lot, you cannot buy the things you want. Once you get older, you earn more, so you can accomplish most of your wishes. For instance, when I was studying in my University I was dreaming about travelling abroad, but I could not do it. Once I finished studying, I started working as a flight attendant and now I am travelling the world. Even though I do not have a lot of parties right now, I do not have time to meet with friends often, I wake up almost every day in different parts of the world and I enjoy every moment. Obviously as I am getting older, the things I enjoy change, but it does not mean I stop enjoying my life.
Second, people who are older know the value of time and that is why they enjoy every moment even more, that the young ones who do not think about time at all. When we are young, we are very motivated and always in rush, we forget to "take a moment and smell the roses". For example, my sister Anna when she in her twenties, she was very concentrated on her career goals. She worked hard seven days per week and I have to admit she became very successful, but not happy. Time passed by and she realized that she never had time to do what she wanted to do, but not what she had to do. No she changed her values a lot, she would rather spend time with family or on her hobby, than work extra hours. She tries to enjoy every day of her life, because she knows, that she has only one life. This example shows that older people think about joy and real values even more than young people.
To sum up, every person should learn how to enjoy life and this skill does not depend on your age. Young people have more energy, and they are willing to investigate this word, older people are more down to Earth, but it does not mean that they do not enjoy their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 431, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...d I think that the age does not matter. i feel this way for two main reasons, whi...
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Line 1, column 431, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d I think that the age does not matter. i feel this way for two main reasons, whi...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to travel'.
Suggestion: to travel
...If you are a student, you cannot afford travelling a lot, you cannot buy the things you wa...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'i think', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.158878504673 0.229887763892 69% => OK
Verbs: 0.203738317757 0.158761421928 128% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0616822429907 0.0866891130778 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0747663551402 0.046263068375 162% => OK
Pronouns: 0.128971962617 0.0685040099705 188% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0841121495327 0.118717715034 71% => OK
Participles: 0.018691588785 0.0351676179071 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.11608806886 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0280373831776 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00373831775701 0.00188951952338 198% => OK
Determiners: 0.0579439252336 0.0887237588012 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0130841121495 0.0209618222197 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0280373831776 0.0139019557991 202% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2440.0 2387.08602151 102% => OK
No of words: 471.0 408.028673835 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1804670913 5.86048508987 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.218683651805 0.338922669872 65% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.110403397028 0.251872472559 44% => More words length more than 6 chars wanted.
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0636942675159 0.174417080927 37% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0424628450106 0.112833075102 38% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.11608806886 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456475583864 0.524397521467 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.3216056497 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4090909091 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1823482595 48.84282405 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.909090909 120.699889404 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4090909091 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.644075263715 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 32.4494306119 45.7405998639 71% => OK
Elegance: 0.642201834862 1.45489161554 44% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175216597065 0.300154397459 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.148020470417 0.103427244359 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107954532278 0.0752933317313 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.44625156264 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138567227919 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680213330617 0.114077575197 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777723314221 0.0781384742642 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.339603984309 0.336927656856 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.112156962979 0.067059652881 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149207974664 0.210909579961 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642688317882 0.0618886996521 104% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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