Younger people enjoy life more than older people do
The argument here states that younger people enjoy life more than the older people do , both the generations have there perks and this benefits depend upon which situation and environment an individual is living. Considering the general and ideal situation than in my point of view yes the younger's enjoy life more than the older's. I will explore my point by giving reasons further in this essay.
Firstly young people have more energy and their body is strong , so they can do whatever they can do. Such as they can play , climb mountains, walk long distances. This energy and enthusiam stays in the body as long as you are young, as aging starts problems and weakness enter the body. There may be exceptions to this but as we are considering the general situation we will not consider that. One such example is that there was one family living adjacent to me in my society. family consist of one child and his parents and his grand parents. Now the younger child can pass his whole day easily as he has many option i.e to play outdoor games , play video games , going out with his freinds , eat any type of food available. But on other hand his gran parents were 80 years old , so they need support of the stick to walk , they were diabetic so they were not allowed to eat sweets. Their life was boring as they need to stay home all time , eat simple food and read ritual books. Their's no thrill in that life, as a result it makes the person lazy.
Secondly younger tend to have good immune system so they are resistant to diseases , olders tend to loses their immune so their resistance towards the disease tend to lost. Young people dont want anyone support to carry out their routine , but older need support and help of someone who can do the work pon behalf of them. One such incidence of my grandparents as they have turned into early 80's body loses that strength. So once we visited a place called pavagadh. There were many steps to climb , as an younger one i climbes all the stairs at once but my grandparents needed support of my parents to climb the stairs. That feeling of dependence on someone often restrict us from visiting such places and we can not enjoy our life to the fullest.
So considering this reasons in my view younger enjoy their life more than the older people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5845410628 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3237112797 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509661835749 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1739742382 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312717469336 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972460726865 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155978774738 0.0737576698707 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30460481005 0.150856017488 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192394287246 0.0645574589148 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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