In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life?
Since the dawn of humanity, human beings pursue the behaviors in the life that have great affection and lead them toward the prosperous and development. Achieving to the desires and ideals depend on humans' both intrinsic and extrinsic characteristics. From intrinsic viewpoint, people can fortify their stage in the community through obeying several worthwhile social attributes, such as truth, loyalty, and virtue, to name but a few. As far as I am concerned, truth and honesty are important facets of mankind which play a crucial role in paving the way for the upcoming opportunities and progress. Therefore, achieving to the zenith of development, gaining valuable and real friends, and enjoying healthy mind have conspicuous benefits for those of people who live with honesty.
In today's modern world, with the galloping growth of technology, human beings confront with new demands so that supplying these requirements have made important challenges in their life. In this condition, sometimes people neglect their personality and responsibilities in order to reach temporal benefits. With this in mind, people are following those of individuals who are honest in their work and life situations so much so that they may offer them some important and unmatched conditions that enhance their grade in the near future. Statistics approve that managers have great penchant to hire the trustful and honest workers rather than dishonest and mendacious ones, which is indicative that one of the key element in all facets of life is truth that brings a real advancement.
Secondly, dishonest people have construct their life based on unreal pillars and are always in pressure in sustaining their situation in the society. In contrast, honesty can bring various benefits to the individuals specially from psychological stands of view. Honest people enjoy a healthy mind without any stress so that they can fulfill their life's demand as well as respond their current opportunities considering all aspects of the situation. In addition, their spirit is rife of great man-made features and always strive to broad the peaceful in the society and through gathering people, create a sense of collaboration to defeat the huge dangerous that have surrounded the humans' life.
Last but not least, everyone in the life needs to make relationships with different people who can have vital benefits for them. Obviously, in today's world, people cannot be self-reliant in the entire stages of life and should communicate with experts and reliable individuals. Accordingly, each person wants share his or her achievements and happiness with reliable and honest friends. Therefore, honesty can be promising for the humans to making future strength connections with persons who are stable in their friendships. In other points of view, it is important to note that honest people exposure to be friend with those of people who can bring high level of scientific, economic, and social improvement, while dishonest people close their eyes to the opportunities and put themselves in ambiguous situations.
To sum up, life is replete with different hopeful and happiness scenes and invites various humans with diverse beliefs and cultures from all around the world that share the main goal of humanity in the path of peace and honesty. Take a moment in your mind that people are going to the zenith of spirituality rather than transient and short-lived happiness. Thus, through fortifying their human characteristic can construct an ideal place in the world to realize the goals of humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'constructed'.
Suggestion: constructed
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Line 5, column 682, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...huge dangerous that have surrounded the humans life. Last but not least, everyone i...
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Line 7, column 411, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... honest friends. Therefore, honesty can be promising for the humans to making future strengt...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'as well as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257281553398 0.229887763892 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.122977346278 0.158761421928 77% => OK
Adjectives: 0.126213592233 0.0866891130778 146% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0323624595469 0.046263068375 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0388349514563 0.0685040099705 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.145631067961 0.118717715034 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0323624595469 0.0351676179071 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85729470426 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0258899676375 0.0309702414327 84% => OK
Particles: 0.00161812297735 0.00188951952338 86% => OK
Determiners: 0.0809061488673 0.0887237588012 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0161812297735 0.0209618222197 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0177993527508 0.0139019557991 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3574.0 2387.08602151 150% => OK
No of words: 566.0 408.028673835 139% => OK
Chars per words: 6.31448763251 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87757670434 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.406360424028 0.338922669872 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286219081272 0.251872472559 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.213780918728 0.174417080927 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.164310954064 0.112833075102 146% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85729470426 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 212.727598566 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521201413428 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 64.7760280933 59.2087087015 109% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 26.9523809524 20.5533526081 131% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5514845136 48.84282405 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.19047619 120.699889404 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9523809524 20.5533526081 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.761904761905 0.644075263715 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 55.5742890796 45.7405998639 121% => OK
Elegance: 2.24166666667 1.45489161554 154% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383648850405 0.300154397459 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0962148524745 0.103427244359 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0393101048318 0.0752933317313 52% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.571819474329 0.497263757937 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11430355044 0.151897553556 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169810075493 0.114077575197 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622845258495 0.0781384742642 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.473412699558 0.336927656856 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0301126478166 0.067059652881 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285345116209 0.210909579961 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307012003332 0.0618886996521 50% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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