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Grammar and spelling errors:
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according to the reading passage,three doubts wer...
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according to the reading passage,three doubts were stated in the reading due t...
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...om chevalier is inaccurate and distorted,while in the listening passage lecturer menti...
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...contradicts to the passages arguments. in the reading section,three doubts were p...
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...sages arguments. in the reading section,three doubts were pointed out in order to inv...
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...r related to chevalier de seingalt.first,in his memoir the chevalier claims that he...
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...derable sum of money from swiss merchant,while he was known as a wealthy person.second...
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Suggestion: , critics
... he was known as a wealthy person.second,critics were also skeptical about authenticity ...
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Suggestion: , which
...versation between chevalier and voltaire,which was written by some witnesses.third,cri...
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...hich was written by some witnesses.third,critics have also questioned whether chevalier...
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...esses.third,critics have also questioned whether chevalier escaped from prison or...
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...from prison or bribe jailers for free. while in the lecture,speaker was arguing that...
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... jailers for free. while in the lecture,speaker was arguing that it can be possible tha...
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...e possible that one memoir be inaccurate,but it does not indicate that it is unrelia...
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...t indicate that it is unreliable.besides,he mentioned three ideas in order to contr...
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...contradicts to passages arguements.first,according to loan from merchant,it was obvious th...
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...ts.first,according to loan from merchant,it was obvious that the chevalier was weal...
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...s obvious that the chevalier was wealthy,but he usually borrowed money when he ran o...
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...y borrowed money when he ran out of cash,which does not show that he was poor.second,a...
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...ch does not show that he was poor.second,according to conversation between chevalier and v...
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...versation between chevalier and voltaire,although it is not possible to record every deta...
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...pletely during conversation between them,but some witnesses claimed that they wrote...
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...ersation between them,but some witnesses claimed that they wrote most of the info...
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...of the informations that they knew.third,according to escape from prison,other prisoners h...
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...ew.third,according to escape from prison,other prisoners had more powerful friends tha...
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...than chevalier in order to bribe jailers,alsothe ceiling of the prison was repaired afte...
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...the prison was repaired after he escaped,which indicates yhat he escaped from prison.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, second, so, then, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 231.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0 5.08290768461 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.28019234099 2.5805825403 166% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 13.0662251656 23% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 21.2450331126 362% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 253.67476991 49.2860985944 515% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 462.0 110.228320801 419% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.0 21.698381199 355% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06452816374 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 4.19205298013 644% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.3 13.3589403974 339% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.6 53.8541721854 -44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 5.55761589404 347% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.7 11.0289183223 324% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.7 12.2367328918 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.83 8.42419426049 140% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 10.7273730684 289% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 10.498013245 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 11.2008830022 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:

para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3

Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).

Don't need a conclusion paragraph.

Read sample essays from ETS:
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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