Agree or disagree
Improving health care, education and pensions needs to be addressed most urgently in Chile
One of the most important complications of any politician is to decide in which order to put needs of the population in a hierarchy, and what criteria must be used to order the problems of any members of one community. In my opinion, the complications that have to be in the top of the list are related with survival and quality of life, and these ones have direct relationship with education, pensions and health care, whose reality in Chile is quite precarious and I am going to describe it.
Basic services aren´t the best in Chile, being precarious to the people who use them, and this situation should not be like that. The republic has one of the worst public educational and medical management in Latin-American, and they directly result in an unhealthy quality of life for Chileans. There are a lack of professionals, bad facilities and the assistance of the institutions of the government are worse in comparison with particulars. That is the first reason that I thought hospitals, schools and everything that is associated with them have to be a priority, because a big percentage of the nation lives without enough benefits to be considered a good well-being as a result of this situation. The reality of Chile is reaffirmed by different research which give critic numbers. For example, an investigation revealed by Bio radio indicates that a half of the population earn less than four hundred thousand pesos and the minimum quantity to be recognized to survive is four hundred and fifty thousand pesos, and this amount doesn’t consider factors such as a college, or abnormal events (such as an emergency), thus they be bound to demand public benefits to attend their needs and urgencies (they), which are not enough to cover the demands of the population. A society in these conditions is not worthy, the issue of the quality of live must be changed.
Another urgent dilemma is the salary of retired workers, which is unsustainable to live product of the pension legislation, and it must be different because it has affiliation with the subsidy of elderly. The main problem is that big companies are owners of the structure of distribution, hence they are interested obtaining cash instead of administrating finances with the focus of obtaining the best way to deliver decent benefits. And sadness statistics affirms this is a focal point, which it can be seen by the big profits that pension plan company earns in contrast with the poor dividend that the people attain. I believe that this situation doesn’t have to happen, people who have been working their entire life, in a time that it is supposed to be to relax and enjoy their last days, and instead, they are doomed to continue working because the income that they receive isn´t enough to keep a respectable life style. There are a big number of retire citizens with problem with their medication, sickness and life styles. Indeed, Chile has a big scale of depression into old men and women, derive of their routine situation. Poverty is totally inconceivable, but even more so in those who cannot work. Therefore, that situation should to be changed, is a priority.
Summarizing, I believe that health, education and pensions are the most urgent topics to consider as a priority because are correlated with the maintenance of the individuals. Adding, if in case are problems are solved, the protests are going to decrease. Don’t forget, every change involves time, thus we have to have some patient to see a new and better country
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: these
... with survival and quality of life, and these ones have direct relationship with education...
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Suggestion:
...st days, and instead, they are doomed to continue working because the income that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in contrast, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 42.0 10.4613686534 401% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 7.30242825607 329% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 23.0 12.0772626932 190% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 22.412803532 205% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 85.0 30.3222958057 280% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 5.01324503311 379% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2947.0 1373.03311258 215% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 594.0 270.72406181 219% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96127946128 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93681225224 4.04702891845 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87352384611 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 298.0 145.348785872 205% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501683501684 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 945.0 419.366225166 225% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.51434878587 660% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.35859455 49.2860985944 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.35 110.228320801 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 21.698381199 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 4.45695364238 247% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198961313752 0.272083759551 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573311305324 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577625962283 0.0662205650399 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127693576501 0.162205337803 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300661531187 0.0443174109184 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.3589403974 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.8541721854 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 151.0 63.6247240618 237% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.7273730684 182% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
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Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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