The professor refutes the opinion in the reading passage. She supports her idea about buying a franchise by three reasons discussing in the following passage.
First, franchising company force the owner to buy specific products which is overpriced. They probably have built reliable contract between suppliers of the goods and services however it could be a bit expensive. The owner could find cheaper products as same as one they receive from the parent company.
Second, the cost for advertisement is usually six percent of their gain so it is a lot. The parent company wants to advertise their company name to the market so not the name of brand.
Finally, the professor agrees with the fact that starting an independent business is more risky. In contrast, she has shown third reason which is not showed in the reading passage. There is an independent business already existed so the owner might take that business instead of franchising one. According to the reading passage, the failure rate for starting independent business is high compared to the franchises. However, the research has shown that buying existing business is tend to success two times more than franchising one first four years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. The owner could find cheaper products as same as one they receive from the par...
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Line 7, column 483, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
... shown that buying existing business is tend to success two times more than franchis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, so, third, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 1373.03311258 74% => OK
No of words: 197.0 270.72406181 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15228426396 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63166517121 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 145.348785872 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598984771574 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 419.366225166 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.0726112457 49.2860985944 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5833333333 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06452816374 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208895553058 0.272083759551 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736877688679 0.0996497079465 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548585500726 0.0662205650399 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11506568505 0.162205337803 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572614123319 0.0443174109184 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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