The passage mentions about recent study archaeologist did on a fossil of a 150 million year old mammals known as R.Robustus(R.R) and having said that the mammal`s stomach contained remains of a psittacosaur dinosaurs. And the lecturer provides evidences that R.R hunted the dinosaurs.
Firstly, in the passage, R.R was only the size of domestic cat and it is unlikely that it could hunt such tall full grown dinosaurs. And the lecturer refutes the point having said that R.R could have hunted a baby dinosaurs as they are smaller than the giant dinosaurs.
Secondly, the passage mentions that R.R were much suited for scavening than hunting as they were short and this feature suggested they did not chase after pray. And the lecturer claims that Tesmania devil that has speed of 15km/hr was an active and successful hunter which showed that why not R.R ?
Thirdly, passage mentions about the bones found inside the stomach of the R.R that had no marks of teeth so they could have swallowed the eggs of the dinosaurs and were not an active hunter. And the lecturer claims that, they had powerful jaws to hold and grab their preys and they did`t used back teeth for chewing the prey and could have swallowed with no scars of teeth in their bones.
Thus, in this way, the lecturer responds or challenges to the points made in the passage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: RobustusR
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Suggestion: R
...n year old mammals known as R.RobustusR.R and having said that the mammal's ...
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Suggestion:
...sittacosaur dinosaurs. And the lecturer provides evidences that R.R hunted the d...
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Suggestion: R
...the lecturer provides evidences that R.R hunted the dinosaurs. Firstly, in t...
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Suggestion: R
...nosaurs. Firstly, in the passage, R.R was only the size of domestic cat and i...
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Suggestion: R
...er refutes the point having said that R.R could have hunted a baby dinosaurs as t...
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Suggestion: dinosaur
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Suggestion: R
...sful hunter which showed that why not R.R ? Thirdly, passage mentions about ...
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...ful hunter which showed that why not R.R ? Thirdly, passage mentions about th...
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Suggestion: R
...bones found inside the stomach of the R.R that had no marks of teeth so they cou...
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...ones found inside the stomach of the R.R that had no marks of teeth so they could...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 232.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83620689655 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43107192486 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547413793103 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 419.366225166 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.881798908 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 21.698381199 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151365615851 0.272083759551 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062564428079 0.0996497079465 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111258389188 0.0662205650399 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872069020834 0.162205337803 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114356596686 0.0443174109184 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.8541721854 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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