Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
This statement is fundamentally correct; it is necessery of the young people to get the ability to make plan because of the complexitiy of the modern life; however, some people keep the view that people ecan handel all of their work without any plan and organization before, but I think that we would able to do our work in the best way if we have plan before then. Therefore, I totally agree with the statement and I want to reinforce my opinion form the following aspect.
The chief reason why I generally agree with the statement is that, there are lots of things that we can do which is enjoyable to us but don't have any benefit to us. Like going to Instagram, explore unimportant things, reading jocks and lots of thing when we do in our spare time. Therefore, if we don't have any plan, we don't understand how time spend. Finally we couldn't catch life. Moreover, I read in one book, i that solutions we tries to change our beliefs instead of changing our lifestyle. for example, one of mu friends knows that she have to study harder, but she can't left her phone. after the exams she falls in two important classes. instead she says that I should have to study harder to improve myself and pass the test. she says the teacher didn't love me and I know she don't let me to pass the test.
The second reason why I totally agree with statement is that, by making plans we figure out what we have to do in the next step, what we need before. Moreover, it enable us to know the possiable problems and their irritional solution before it happens and prepare us, so we can do everything with little problem in the shorter time.
In the final analysis, making plan before started any things helps us to save time. For example, when I want to sleep, I make plan for my next day. like what I have to study and what time I have to study. it helps me to manage my day in the best way. and improve my concentrate during my studies because I know what I have do next.
In a nutshell, making plan helps to us to manege our work and do everything in the best part of our life before it be late to do anything. It helps us to know what is exactly necessary and important to create a better life for our future, or else we couldn’t recognize the spend of the time. and one day we see we lost all of the opportunities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 349, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
... do our work in the best way if we have plan before then. Therefore, I totally agree...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... we can do which is enjoyable to us but dont have any benefit to us. Like going to I...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of things'.
Suggestion: lots of things
...e unimportant things, reading jocks and lots of thing when we do in our spare time. Therefore...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... do in our spare time. Therefore, if we dont have any plan, we dont understand how t...
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Suggestion: don't
...Therefore, if we dont have any plan, we dont understand how time spend. Finally we c...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...lan, we dont understand how time spend. Finally we couldnt catch life. Moreover, I read...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...t understand how time spend. Finally we couldnt catch life. Moreover, I read in one boo...
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'try'
Suggestion: try
...I read in one book, i that solutions we tries to change our beliefs instead of changi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...iefs instead of changing our lifestyle. for example, one of mu friends knows that s...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... that she have to study harder, but she cant left her phone. after the exams she fal...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
... that she have to study harder, but she cant left her phone. after the exams she fal...
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Suggestion: After
...dy harder, but she cant left her phone. after the exams she falls in two important cl...
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Message: “after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...dy harder, but she cant left her phone. after the exams she falls in two important cl...
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Suggestion: Instead
...ams she falls in two important classes. instead she says that I should have to study ha...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: instead,
...ams she falls in two important classes. instead she says that I should have to study ha...
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Suggestion: She
...er to improve myself and pass the test. she says the teacher didnt love me and I kn...
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Suggestion: didn't
...and pass the test. she says the teacher didnt love me and I know she dont let me to p...
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Suggestion: don't
...he teacher didnt love me and I know she dont let me to pass the test. The second...
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Message: Did you mean 'enables'?
Suggestion: enables
...step, what we need before. Moreover, it enable us to know the possiable problems and t...
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Suggestion: Like
... to sleep, I make plan for my next day. like what I have to study and what time I ha...
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Suggestion: It
...to study and what time I have to study. it helps me to manage my day in the best w...
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Suggestion: And
...ps me to manage my day in the best way. and improve my concentrate during my studie...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...g my studies because I know what I have do next. In a nutshell, making plan he...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ure, or else we couldn't recognize the spend of the time. and one day we see we lost...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...apos;t recognize the spend of the time. and one day we see we lost all of the oppor...
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Line 9, column 325, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...of the time. and one day we see we lost all of the opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 22.412803532 344% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 30.3222958057 204% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1373.03311258 137% => OK
No of words: 438.0 270.72406181 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29908675799 5.08290768461 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37079213009 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 145.348785872 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456621004566 0.540411800872 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 419.366225166 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7162898546 49.2860985944 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 7.06452816374 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 4.19205298013 620% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 4.33554083885 369% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174541424018 0.272083759551 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528304317688 0.0996497079465 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650041541785 0.0662205650399 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114075335557 0.162205337803 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770263067546 0.0443174109184 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 12.2367328918 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.42419426049 80% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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