Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In our modern life, there are some complexity and complicated situation which we should anticipate them or have plan to find a soloution for them. For instance, this complexity can be considered as job, providing food, children growth, and protecting your family. these matters and issues need a lot of plans and organizations for youths to attend.
By enhancement of technology, there are plentiful job oppurtunities in a country but the difficulties of obtaining such jobs are first, abundant demands for specific career and second, need of certain skills and knowledge for getting the job. Therefore, youths after getting legal age should consider attending to colleges and universities for attainig that knowledge and be expertise in their appealing fields. Moreover, they must struggle and make efforts to be perfect in their interested expertise to win the challenge among their comptetors.
Secondly, economic conditions in a certain country is rising and falling; hence, people should able to plan and organize a vital decisions to utilize these raising and failures for their owns purpose astutely. furthermore, they should predict future economy and invest on some stock markets to gain some money from these opportunities and become rich.
For the third and final reason, most of the people need family to spend their times with and they intend to marry and make new life with their wife and giving birth to several children and growing them together. however, these kinds of choices are not straightforward and need so much patience and hardworking to have a good family and be cheerful with them. some of the means to have good family are mentions above which contains having good and payful jobs, utilization of economic situation, and conisderation of some investment for making some money. these are essential for making life good and easy for your family but not enough because youths should make some crucial decisions and choices before marriage and prepare themselves for these harsh, complicated life. furthermore, they should accept the burden for creating another humanbeings and introduce them to globe. Additionally, they should behave their children appropriately then they will grow strong and self confidence children instead of misbehaving them and make some cruel criminal out of them. we conclude that choices for creating family is very complex and hard compare to job and economical position to make and should factor in well-designed and mature plans. Unfortunately our young generation do not consider these factors and impacts and make decision based on constant feeling.
In a nutshell, our daily life include some elaborated choice that we make one smartly. however our life in modern world is very complicated relative to past, traditional one. which we should consider several issues like family, expertise, and economy for being prosperous and thriving in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'situations'?
Suggestion: situations
...ere are some complexity and complicated situation which we should anticipate them or have...
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Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...which we should anticipate them or have plan to find a soloution for them. For insta...
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Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...ren growth, and protecting your family. these matters and issues need a lot of plans ...
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Line 13, column 151, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this raising' or 'these raisings'?
Suggestion: this raising; these raisings
...d organize a vital decisions to utilize these raising and failures for their owns purpose ast...
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Line 13, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ilures for their owns purpose astutely. furthermore, they should predict future economy and...
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Line 19, column 213, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ral children and growing them together. however, these kinds of choices are not straigh...
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Line 19, column 360, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
... good family and be cheerful with them. some of the means to have good family are me...
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Line 19, column 360, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... good family and be cheerful with them. some of the means to have good family are mentions ...
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Line 19, column 556, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
... some investment for making some money. these are essential for making life good and ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...lves for these harsh, complicated life. furthermore, they should accept the burden for crea...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...d make some cruel criminal out of them. we conclude that choices for creating fami...
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Line 19, column 1155, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ery complex and hard compare to job and economical position to make and should factor in w...
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Line 25, column 88, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...orated choice that we make one smartly. however our life in modern world is very compli...
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Line 25, column 88, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...orated choice that we make one smartly. however our life in modern world is very compli...
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Line 25, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...ated relative to past, traditional one. which we should consider several issues like ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 5.04856512141 317% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 41.0 7.30242825607 561% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 22.412803532 192% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2478.0 1373.03311258 180% => OK
No of words: 461.0 270.72406181 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37527114967 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.04702891845 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74841162334 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 145.348785872 169% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531453362256 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 765.9 419.366225166 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8632713859 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.421052632 110.228320801 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2631578947 21.698381199 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 7.06452816374 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174039481826 0.272083759551 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596931026161 0.0996497079465 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427586005665 0.0662205650399 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986265843393 0.162205337803 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523054110201 0.0443174109184 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.3589403974 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.8541721854 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 63.6247240618 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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