Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the contemprory world that we live in, our lives are very dependant to transmutions and these transmution are reachable by vehichles like cars. However, cars made too many issues for human beings and need to find substutude instead of cars for transmution.
In this passage we are going to support the theory of car amount reduction in the future and states the reasons for it.
To begin with, cars consume energy and this energy is fuel. it is predicted that fuel resources will be eliminated in next few decades. For this reason, the scientists try to manufacture vehichles which do not need fuels as their energy or people discover substitude for cars like bikes, buses or subways. another reason can be debates that by changing the energy source of the car, the potential for countries war in the purpose of the fuel will be vanished.
Secondly, cars causes for many pollutions as air pollution and sound pollution. In countries which there are no schedule for decreasing the pollution amount, it will consider several problems like the rising level of diverese perilous diseases as cancer. also these pollution causes the animals which inhabitat in the specific regions to extinct or migrate to another area. sound pollution is also cause severe consequences like mental issues and disorders because of having no peace. The major air pollution is mainly for the cars factories and oil refinories. Moreover, they emits their toxic wastes in the enivironment as rivers, oceans and wood which cause many animals death and extinction.
Thirdly, the traffics as the result of abundant cars in the street is also frustratung. Therfore too many cars and vehechiles in the highway is as result of each family member bought one car for each member that cause the increase in the amount of cars with a single driver. In future scientist may found efficient way to not only drive in the ground but also fly in the air simultounsly which causes major decrease in heavily traffics. it is good to remind that these traffics waste peoples time and lives in the highways.
In nutshell, the thoeory about the elimination of cars in future is because three main reason personally. first is for the lack of fuel, second is for eclatic pollutions and final is traffic which waste peoples lives. Hence, sicientist and inventors try to discover subsequent for ongoing cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2009.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0604534005 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57832650701 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521410579345 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7526869766 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.45 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.85 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0401102090767 0.236089414692 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0141595084267 0.076458572812 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0191791242918 0.0737576698707 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0266579315065 0.150856017488 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214260877871 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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