Broccoli is a vegetable that is popular throughout the United States, but it can be grown only in temperate climates with mild summers. Because of this limitation, 90 percent of the broccoli consumed in the United States is grown in the cooler regions of California, on the West Coast. It must be shipped 4:000 kilometers across the entire country to reach the populous East Coast
This situation may soon change, however: scientists are attempting to create a new type of broccoli that can be grown on the East Coast despite the hotter summers there. This project has several potential benefits.
First, growing broccoli on the East Coast and distributing it to nearby grocery stores would lower broccoli costs for consumers Transporting the vegetable from California by truck takes several days, which makes transportation costs high. Growing broccoli locally would reduce transportation costs, so stores could sell broccoli for less money.
Second; the new type of broccoli will probably be much more desirable to consumers than some other new crops. The new broccoli is being created using traditional breeding techniques: researchers are crossbreeding broccoli with other similar plants that have desirable characteristics, such as resistance to hot summers Other new crops—varieties of squash or maize, for example—were created using genetic modification technology. Genetically modified crops are very controversial: many consumers believe they are unsafe and so reject them. However, the new broccoli will not be in that category.
Third, vegetables are healthiest to eat right after they are harvested because they retain most of their beneficial nutrients and vitamins. The Ion ger it takes for a vegetable like broccoli to reach consumers, the fewer nutrients and vitamins it contains. Broccoli that is grown locally can be eaten much sooner after it is cut, which will make this new broccoli healthier for East Coast residents than California broccoli
In the passage, the author concentrates on several arguments to prove that cultivating Broccoli on the East Coast is more beneficial, accordingly, it mentions three reasons to support this idea. However, the lecturer cast doubt on these arguments and respectively points out the problems with all author's assertions. She mentions that planting Broccoli may not be successful on the East coast like in California.
First of all, the passage argues the point that distributing local Broccoli presents a lower cost in comparison to transporting one from California by track. Because it eliminates transportation costs from the final price and people can buy cheaper Broccoli. The lecturer, however, highlighted the fact that Broccoli cultivation on the east coast accompanies by lower production. She states that the harvested quantity per one hectare on the east coast is lower than on the west coast. She concluded that this idea does not decrease the price on the east cost.
Moreover, the passage contends that a new type of Broccoli will be more favorable for consumers than others. Because researchers use traditional breeding methods and also utilize crossbreeding with other similar plants to make a new vegetable with desirable features. The lecturer brings up the fact that it does not matter whether they say this manipulated plant is the best or not. People, based on their experience with other products from other companies, have a bad impression of these kinds of products. As a result, they do not trust the genetically modified product and maybe they reject the new Broccoli due to this matter.
Finally, the passage indicates that fresh Broccoli keeps not only has beneficial characteristics such as nutrients and vitamins, it has the healthiest quality for eating as well. The lecturer accepted that fresh vegetables are more useful, however, she refutes the author's opinion and raises a point that other vegetables have the same vitamins and nutrients, In addition, they grow up properly in that region even in different seasons, like Kale. Kale is pretty popular among people and even is better than broccoli.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1373.03311258 131% => OK
No of words: 341.0 270.72406181 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26099706745 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82152282421 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 145.348785872 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563049853372 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 419.366225166 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4061188668 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.125 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06452816374 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179223532185 0.272083759551 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058907917589 0.0996497079465 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273566732935 0.0662205650399 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102314943119 0.162205337803 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111510454393 0.0443174109184 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 63.6247240618 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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