Cane toads' spreading may be prevented by several measures
cane toad is a native specy of South america which was deliberately taken to Australia in order to destroy some insects harmful for farms. but they soon multiplied and bacame a new danger to other native animals. some ways proposed to control the population of toads but they are some problems partnered with each of them.
First idea is to build a national fence to prevent toads reaching new areas, like the fence used to control the spread of rabbits earlier. but toads can use rivers and streams to reach those areas and that fence will not stop them.
Secondly, people suggested to organize campaignes so as to destroy the toads. However, this untrained forces can not notice the difference between the toads and austrailian frogs, which are already in danger of extinction..
Because they look pretty similar, it is likely to destroy many frogs in this way.
The other idea was to use virus deseases so as to destroy these toads. Although, this virus will infect many reptile and amphibian species which may transfer to central america and infect cane toads living there. cane toads are an important part of echosystem in central america which dissapearance of them will affect other species too.
To sumarrise, none of the ways suggested in the text can succeed to control the population of toads without unwanted damages to other species.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 228.0 270.72406181 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05701754386 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42522841004 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2302877547 49.2860985944 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0833333333 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06452816374 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153720658221 0.272083759551 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520521462221 0.0996497079465 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461944029136 0.0662205650399 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661272581464 0.162205337803 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435899107224 0.0443174109184 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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