The college years are the best time in a person’s life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.
Although students may struggle with some difficulties and challenges in their college years, I do agree the college years are the best time in a person life. Some reason convince me for having this opinion.
In the first place, I think colleges are as an entrance for achieving a bright future because we learn many new skills and new knowledge and gain new experience that help us toward our goal after graduation. Colleges prepare the ground in which students can choose a field that they are interested in and they can select a good adviser to help them.
The second reason is that, these years improve our social skills. We can find new friends to communicate with them that they are almost as the same age as we are and maybe some of them are from different cultures and languages. Communication with student from all over the country and even from other countries can be an advantage for us so that we can learn about their cultures. There are so many groups and associations that we can participate at their activities and enjoy them for free. For example when I was in the college I was attending the dance clubs that is very delightful for me and now I can do Salsa dance very well. Also, sometimes I was going camping with my college friend and it was so fun.
Furthermore, we may be away from parents in college years that probably it is the first time ever. So we have to learn to get control over our life and accept responsibilities that these features are good practices for future life.
In conclusion, from my point of view, the college years are definitely the most memorable time in a person's life in order to reach brilliant future, having fun, and taking on own responsibility.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: FIRST_TIME_EVER[1]
Message: Use simply 'first time'.
Suggestion: first time
...n college years that probably it is the first time ever. So we have to learn to get control ove...
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Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...definitely the most memorable time in a persons life in order to reach brilliant future...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 22.412803532 205% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 304.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62828947368 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58172975242 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0777577939 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 21.698381199 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06452816374 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199866057215 0.272083759551 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827424005573 0.0996497079465 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868536675546 0.0662205650399 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14583567127 0.162205337803 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120139402606 0.0443174109184 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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