company economies
The reading context states that a four day workweek would be benificial for the economoy of the individual companies as well as the employees who are palatable with this decision & for butreesing the policy they gave three supports. Later on in the lecture the professor carefully scrutinized each point & refutes each points logics by discreeting the gap of the logics.
At the first instance, While the reading context states that the policy will increase company profit because they will be rested and alert in the shortend weekend, the professor thought it will not be specifically true. Because it will force the company to spend more as adding more employee mens it will be required more office space .Additionaly , the health insurances & other office stuffs doesn't have a conncetion that whether it is a four day week , it will be the same as like the five days week.
Secodly , The context cites that the policy will curtailed the unemployed rate.However, The professor thought it will not be work be because many more job are also avialable while the unemployed rate is still the same. Moreover, By applying the policy the comapny expectation will be increased , they may want the smae result as like the five days workweek time. So it may be happened that the current employees are doing overtime for making the expectation.
Finally ,The passage claims that it will be better for the individual company.Nevertheless, The professor said it will just increase the risk & reduce the quality of life. Furthermore , he mentioned that it will also reduce the job stability & economic downturn can be happened because of applying these kind of policy.
In recapitualtion , It can considered that the reading context is quite unpersuasive as the the professor refutes the whole logic of the the context.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, well, while, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 5.04856512141 337% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1373.03311258 110% => OK
No of words: 297.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10437710438 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84200535435 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 145.348785872 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 419.366225166 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1483148399 49.2860985944 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.6 110.228320801 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 21.698381199 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06452816374 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 4.19205298013 716% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.049555933101 0.272083759551 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0203884114611 0.0996497079465 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315520650888 0.0662205650399 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0272847105174 0.162205337803 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337721293722 0.0443174109184 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.8541721854 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.2008830022 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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