Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, no one can cast doubts on the fact that educations and the system thereof have a paramount significance in society; acknowledgment of teachers' effort is becoming trendy among peoples. It is my empathetic belief that the teachers should be more appreciated and valued in the present time.
If I were asked to determine a couple of reasons standing behind my points of view, I would strongly suggest that both new methods of study and educations and the new regulations of the education system lead the student to such situations. I will manifest my reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
It is without an adumbration of doubts that by passing the time, and development of technology, education method, system change fundamentally. By using the most up-to-date apparatus such as the Mobile, the Computers, the Tablets, the student's needing the teacher is unnecessary. My personal experience is compelling evidence for what I mean; during the Coronavirus breakthrough, I have attended an online program at the oxford university, in the biology faculty; as a student, I did not see a teacher teach a course; everything was provided already by faculty staffs; hence, students do not appreciate anyone at all.
It also goes without declaring that the new roles of teachers do not seem to be strict enough. not only are the appreciation and valuation of teacher significant but are an illuminating path to the young student to learn how to respect their parents, teachers, professors as well. not being a respectful student notwithstanding, the new generation are adamant and rude about your teachers. to be more specific, when I was studying in the Isfahan University of technology, I saw many of student ridicule their mentors, and there was no rule to prevent and criticize them inasmuch as the regulation and rules are fruitless and absurd.
It can be summed up in accentuating that any individual should be respectful to the teacher, for the teacher, as same as parents, makes a better future for the next generation. I agree that the teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays, unfortunately. the teachers would be thankful for such an effort if we were cautious and responsible about their teachers
It also goes without declaring that the new roles about teachers does not seems to be strict enough. not only are the appreciation and valuation of teacher effective, but are a illuminating path to young student to learn how to respect their parents, teachers, professors as well. not being a respectful student notwithstanding, the new generation are adamant and rude about your teachers. to be more specific, when I was studying in the Isfahan university of technology, I saw many of student ridicule their mentors and there was no rule to prevent and criticize them inasmuch as the regulation and rules are fruitless and absurd.
It can be summed up in accentuating that any individual should be respectful to teacher, for the teacher as as same as parents makes a better future to next generation. I agree with the idea that the teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays unfortunately. the teachers will be thankful to such a effort, if we were cautious and responsible about their teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, i mean, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 10.4613686534 363% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 7.30242825607 315% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 22.412803532 205% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 30.3222958057 224% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 5.01324503311 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2774.0 1373.03311258 202% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 547.0 270.72406181 202% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07129798903 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83611736076 4.04702891845 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03810411859 2.5805825403 118% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 145.348785872 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.383912248629 0.540411800872 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 869.4 419.366225166 207% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 3.25607064018 461% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.25165562914 479% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.5720214726 49.2860985944 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.7 110.228320801 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.35 21.698381199 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35 7.06452816374 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.09492273731 171% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202686851968 0.272083759551 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895220929857 0.0996497079465 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130155137136 0.0662205650399 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117010273533 0.162205337803 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804142737327 0.0443174109184 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 63.6247240618 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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