Essay topics:
Integrated Tpo 65 (Tuna Fish Farming,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,)
Reading passage:
Wild tuna, a species of large ocean fish, have decreased in number because of overfishing Recently, attempts have been made to farm tuna by feeding the fish in ocean cages until they become large enough for sale. However, tuna farming has faced several problems and criticisms.
First, female tuna do not lay eggs in captivity, so tuna farmers must capture large quantities of young wild tuna to stock their farms, further reducing wild tuna populations. These young tuna are caged and fed until they are large enough to be sold. Since the captured females in tuna farms cannot lay eggs to replace the tuna that are sold, tuna farmers continue to catch young wild tuna to keep their farms going and so worsen the decline in wild tuna populations.
Second, tuna raised on farms are very expensive because they depend on a costly, high-protein food derived from other fish. Tuna feed almost exclusively on small fish, which supply them with the proteins and nutrients they require. A single tuna can grow more than four meters long, weigh close to 700 kilograms, and eat 70 kilograms of food a day! It is unlikely that tuna farms can remain profitable while supplying so much expensive food for the tuna.
Third tuna confined to ocean cages are likely to become infested with parasites, organisms that feed on and weaken the animal they attach to. Tuna farmers off the coast of southern Australia have had problems with infestations of blood flukes, a type of parasite that lives within the blood vessels and heart of infected fish. Parasite infestations weaken tuna, slow their growth, and can even cause death, usually by making them susceptible to other diseases. Tuna farms in southern Australia have had 10 percent of their tuna die before they could be sold.
Both the reading and the lecture discuss about the concerns related to wild tuna farming. Indeed, wild tuna is a large ocean fish whose number is decreased due to overfishing. In this regard, the passage explains the problems related to tuna farming; however, the speaker provides some promising solutions for the mentioned issues by the author.
First of all, the text claims that due to the fact that female tuna can not lay eggs in captivity, farmers should capture more young tuna for feeding them and selling them after their growth. As a result, the tuna population will be decreased in a response to the farmers' action. Conversely, the lecturer says that the problem is solved by the technology which injects a hormone into the tunas. The hormone injection process gives rise to laying eggs by the tuna. Moreover, the hormone is not dangerous and both the tuna and its eggs will be healthy after injection. Therefore, the advancement solves the mentioned issue by the author because the farmers do not need to capture myriad numbers of tuna to boost profit. In other words, farmers just need to grow a few tunas which have laying eggs ability that can proliferate tuna's number for the farmers.
Secondly, the author states that the tunas need high protein foods in large quantity that is expensive and costly. So, tuna farming is not profitable for farmers because they must purchase expensive fishes which include proteins. On the other hand, although the lecturer accepts that the tunas need a high protein diet, she believes that if farmers supply the necessary proteins by plants instead of fishes, providing tuna's food is not costly anymore. Actually, some certain plants not only are full of protein, but also are cheap; so, the author's concern can be solved by the speaker's idea.
Finally, the passage explains that various tunas are infected by special parasites such as blood flukes that do not let tunas grow and kill them. Nevertheless, the professor talks about a remedy that is at the hand for preventing from the disease. She says that many ocean animals are infected by parasites; nonetheless, we can treat the disease by numerous techniques. For example, in southern Australia, the problem is solved by replacing the tunas' cages to deeper place of the ocean because the blood flukes parasite can not be alive at the deep part of the ocean. It is due to the fact that the vital nutritious for the parasite is available only in the close shore water. Therefore, by transporting tunas to the offshore water, tunas will not be infected by the blood flukes because the parasite can not thrive at the deep ocean due to lack of necessary food for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'farmers'' or 'farmer's'?
Suggestion: farmers'; farmer's
... will be decreased in a response to the farmers action. Conversely, the lecturer says t...
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Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'speakers'' or 'speaker's'?
Suggestion: speakers'; speaker's
...he authors concern can be solved by the speakers idea. Finally, the passage explains th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, conversely, finally, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 30.3222958057 162% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2216.0 1373.03311258 161% => OK
No of words: 456.0 270.72406181 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85964912281 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.04702891845 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41942721308 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 145.348785872 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478070175439 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 690.3 419.366225166 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.23620309051 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0417649487 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.05 7.06452816374 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.576858232763 0.272083759551 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191148889246 0.0996497079465 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112303378329 0.0662205650399 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.354440922573 0.162205337803 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538007234001 0.0443174109184 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 63.6247240618 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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