Few people like to buy technical devices as soon as they are launch. Author like to buy after the review. Which do you prefer and why.
Now a days people constantly buy number of technical devices. People use a new technology in a life. It’s become a make easier life. Any new devices launch they add every time new technology and people influences them and they buy new technical devices. Some people like to buy technical devices as soon as they are launch .According to me buy technical devices after the review the reason are as fellow.
To begin with, buy any technical devices first check the devices and know how it’s work and it’s use full for us. First check technical devices is successful in the market then after buy. For an example, I was buy a vivo phone as they are launch time and after It’s work very solve.
Furthermore, if buy new devices then it’s help to adapted with new technology but in this situation not buy at the launch time It’s not good and vest money. Buy devices is after review never trust any one. For an example, My brother buy iphone X and they are apple successful model they buy after check user review and they don’t west money.
To sum up, more relevant result of the devices, save money. buy technical devices after the review.
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| 2018-08-17 | vibhuti patel | 60 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...vant result of the devices, save money. buy technical devices after the review.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 12.0772626932 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 1373.03311258 71% => OK
No of words: 205.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72195121951 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38939756047 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 145.348785872 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478048780488 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 419.366225166 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7188455568 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4615384615 110.228320801 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 21.698381199 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06452816374 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427195425463 0.272083759551 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192716287579 0.0996497079465 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149326829341 0.0662205650399 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283898783609 0.162205337803 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761343848635 0.0443174109184 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.3589403974 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.42419426049 78% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 63.6247240618 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.