Franchise
The reading and the lecture are both about the use of a franchise for the inexperienced people who want starting in the business world. The author of the reading feels that a franchise improve the chance for the successful business. The lecturer disagrees with the claims made by the author. In her opinion buying a franchise it is not the best way to start a business. She feels that there are not advantages to do this.
Initially, the article mention that could be difficult for the first-time business owners to choose the right supplies and services. The article mention that buying a franchise remove much of this problem. This point is challenged by the lecture because, acquiring a franchise the owner is forced by a contract buy specific products and services usually overpriced. She claims that even if the owner find an equal product available it is not allowed to choose a cheaper version.
Secondly, the writer suggests that a franchise could save a lot of money in advertising products. In the article, it is said that, advertising is an underlying reason in a business’s success. The lecture, however, counters this by mentioning that the owner need to pay around 6% of the income to the parent company in return for advertising services. She elaborates on this by bringing up the point that the parent company focus on the brand and not the owner’s individual business, offering a little benefits.
Finally, the author states that a franchise could provide more security.The article continues, stating that, the business breakdown is common with new business owners, especially in the beginning. In contrast, the lecturer’s position is that in fact starting a business owners is more secure than buying a franchise. She notes that a good alternative could be bought an already independent business from a previously owner. This last option increase the probability of the business success twice than a franchise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the chance for the successful business. The lecturer disagrees with the claims made...
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Line 5, column 480, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot allowed to choose a cheaper version. Secondly, the writer suggests that a fra...
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Line 9, column 346, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...parent company in return for advertising services. She elaborates on this by brin...
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Line 13, column 73, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...a franchise could provide more security.The article continues, stating that, the bu...
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Line 13, column 276, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'owner'?
Suggestion: owner
...ion is that in fact starting a business owners is more secure than buying a franchise....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 319.0 270.72406181 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15047021944 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91935210613 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507836990596 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0543051958 49.2860985944 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6470588235 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 7.06452816374 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223227619572 0.272083759551 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887818911616 0.0996497079465 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109446287828 0.0662205650399 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153040287826 0.162205337803 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827294249922 0.0443174109184 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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