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Based on the reading passage the author listed three reasons that electronic medical record system is better than the traditional type. On the other hand, the lecturer refutes all the reason which mentioned in the reading passage with some counter-evidence.
Firstly, the author stated that electronic medical record system can help reduce costs by saving money and it does not need a lot space to storage. In addition, electronic medical record system provides easier accessibility to data. However, the lecturer implies that the cost difference between traditional and modern type is not significant, because, most of the doctors who become adapt with electronic record, keep their descriptions as a backup and they write on the paper, yet. As a result, they use both of them, so the cost of recording does not decline.
Secondly, the author related that electronic medical records reduce the risk of making a mistake and also decline its subsequences for patient's health, because electronic medical records associated with standardization of form as well as legible computer fonts minimize the possibility of human error. Conversely, the lecturer asserts although, must of the doctors are adapted with electronic medical records, but they take note and write decryption on the paper and latter some staff transfer data on the computer, so errors possibility is remain, now.
Finally, the author declared that by this method researcher can gather and study data more comfortable rather than past that they obliged to find data among a numerous data. On contrary, the lecturer demonstrates that there are some lows that limit the researchers about accessibility to data. These lows identity the patients' information as a private data and hardly would researcher can have access to them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g passage with some counter-evidence. Firstly, the author stated that electron...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e cost of recording does not decline. Secondly, the author related that electr...
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Line 5, column 523, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'errors'' or 'error's'?
Suggestion: errors'; error's
...staff transfer data on the computer, so errors possibility is remain, now. Finally...
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Line 5, column 545, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
... the computer, so errors possibility is remain, now. Finally, the author declared ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so errors possibility is remain, now. Finally, the author declared that by thi...
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
...bility to data. These lows identity the patients information as a private data and hardl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1373.03311258 110% => OK
No of words: 283.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34982332155 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79338846944 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6683559235 49.2860985944 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.636363636 110.228320801 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 21.698381199 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06452816374 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.8541721854 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.2367328918 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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