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The article states that if the trend of evaporation of lake's water continues, the lake would become a dead zone that any speicis could not live there and there are many ways to reverse this trend and provid three soloution to support. However the professor says that each these ways are impractical and refutes each of author's reason.
To begin with the reading states that the first method that can be used is using special desalination facilities in oreder to remove salt from water. The professor refutes this ponit, and states that this way can lead to serious problems. the lefted material are very dangerous to people life, some of these lefted materials are toxic like selenum.
Second, the reading argues that this water can be diliuted by water from the ocean.However,the professor say that this process needs pipe line construction and it is very costly. It needs a consruction of 1000 kilometers pipe-line, and rejected the authore's reason.
Third, the reading contends that by constructing a wall to devide the lake to sevaral section they can control salinization. The professor rejected this point and states, this action works short and and the wall will be destroyed after Earthquake ,as a result, the water with high salinity wound compound with the fresh water.
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- it is better for govenments to improve internet access than iproving public transportation 60
- Some parents offer their school age children money for getting high grade in school 63
- young people make a decision more independently today in comparison to the past 70
- it is better for govenments to improve internet access than iproving public transportation 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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... and refutes each of authors reason. To begin with the reading states that th...
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... this way can lead to serious problems. the lefted material are very dangerous to p...
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...ed materials are toxic like selenum. Second, the reading argues that this wat...
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...can be diliuted by water from the ocean.However,the professor say that this process nee...
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...diliuted by water from the ocean.However,the professor say that this process needs p...
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...truction and it is very costly. It needs a consruction of 1000 kilometers pipe-li...
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...e, and rejected the authores reason. Third, the reading contends that by cons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, third, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 213.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05164319249 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57378925012 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 419.366225166 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9822190606 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.555555556 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120736096394 0.272083759551 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527697496236 0.0996497079465 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100192743904 0.0662205650399 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809611440703 0.162205337803 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906252386652 0.0443174109184 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.