literature has been forgotten to read
In contrast to reading passage, which emphasizes that young humans are reading less literatures than before.However the lecturer states that a literature is just a creative and an imagination.Further, he says that a culture has changed.The passage explains that a literature encourages us to insist with others and expand our understanding of language.In contrast, he points out that music, good movies, songs, and television has taken place of a literature.They all are good source of an entertainment too.The second thing that a professor makes, modern publishers are equivocal to understand.Furthermore, he states that so don't blame on readers that they don't like it.Finally, according to a text, many talented writers have creative ideas regarding to publishers, but they don't have audiences which make content them.Thus writing and reading of literature is likely to abridge because of poor standards of today's readers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun literatures is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...mphasizes that young humans are reading less literatures than before.However the lec...
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Suggestion: However
...re reading less literatures than before.However the lecturer states that a literature i...
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Suggestion: However,
...re reading less literatures than before.However the lecturer states that a literature i...
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Suggestion: Further
...e is just a creative and an imagination.Further, he says that a culture has changed.The...
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...her, he says that a culture has changed.The passage explains that a literature enco...
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Suggestion: In
...nd expand our understanding of language.In contrast, he points out that music, goo...
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Suggestion: They
...evision has taken place of a literature.They all are good source of an entertainment...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
... publishers are equivocal to understand.Furthermore, he states that so dont blame on reader...
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Suggestion: don't
...derstand.Furthermore, he states that so dont blame on readers that they dont like it...
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Suggestion: don't
...that so dont blame on readers that they dont like it.Finally, according to a text, m...
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Suggestion: Finally
...blame on readers that they dont like it.Finally, according to a text, many talented wri...
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Suggestion: don't
...ideas regarding to publishers, but they dont have audiences which make content them....
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Suggestion: Thus
... have audiences which make content them.Thus writing and reading of literature is li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, however, regarding, second, so, thus, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 1373.03311258 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 141.0 270.72406181 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56028368794 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 4.04702891845 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.609225363 2.5805825403 140% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 145.348785872 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68085106383 0.540411800872 126% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 419.366225166 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 13.0662251656 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 141.0 21.2450331126 664% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.2860985944 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 784.0 110.228320801 711% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 141.0 21.698381199 650% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 92.0 7.06452816374 1302% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165792661799 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165792661799 0.0996497079465 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165792661799 0.162205337803 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 75.3 13.3589403974 564% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -88.56 53.8541721854 -164% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 5.55761589404 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 60.6 11.0289183223 549% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.15 12.2367328918 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.01 8.42419426049 190% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 64.0 10.7273730684 597% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 58.4 10.498013245 556% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 11.2008830022 545% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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