the northern land bridge, summarize and cast doubts
the reading passage and the lecture are both about the time period of migration of people. the reading firmly arose some evidence that support the hypothesis. however the lecture repudiated of what stated in the reading passage with fallacious, premises and cast three counter claims as stated below.
at first the reading passage claims that people might have migrated slowly across the grassy tundra of beringia, feeding on herds of animals or coastal marine life. in contrast, the lecturer acknowledged that several archaeological evidence found appears to be much older. that is the evidence was around 19000 years old which was long before the tools were made.as it took centuries for people to travel that far south it was around 15000 years old. by dating techniques it was found that the dates did not tally.
additionally, the reading claims that the ending of ice age also caused ocean levels to rise thus submerging beringia and isolating new migrants from people on Asian side. the lecturer however argues that the oldest remains found was not of the native american's but were from northern islands and japan which resulted that there was diversity. although the diversity reduced at some time due to migration of course.
on top of this, the reading claims that during the later centuries many subsequent finds of clovis tools demonstrate this culture's extensive penetration throughout the continent. the lecture however highlights that the syberian people migrated to america around 40000 years ago which is long before the clovis theory was even came to existence. these differences in the evidence found from different places contradicts the lecture from the theory in the reading.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, in contrast, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 274.0 270.72406181 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22262773723 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47137428838 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 145.348785872 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57299270073 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5086878354 49.2860985944 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.076923077 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06452816374 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 4.19205298013 382% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.021833744386 0.272083759551 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00772388723746 0.0996497079465 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0181219443753 0.0662205650399 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0156922731066 0.162205337803 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157201601402 0.0443174109184 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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