The passage and lecture are both discussing portrait which may or may not to Jane Austen. The passage claima three evidence which support idea that Jane Austen is a subject of portrait. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. He mentions all reasons mentioned in article are all inconvenience.
First, the author states, Austen'family itself has admitted the claim that the girl in the picture is Jane Austen. The professor refutes this notion. He says, Jane Auten dead before seventy years ago. Her relatives who said this picture to Austen never saw her before. They did not know how she look like justb from her sister painting.Therefore, they can not recognize if this portrait to her or not.
Second, the author points to painting that Austen sister did to Jane. This girls in the picture clearly resemble the girl in the portrait, also she look like girls in her family members. This statement is challenged by professor. He mentioned, Austen'family has a very large members. moreover many relatives girls like her neice who are resemble
Austen. That way this reason is unbelievable.
Finally, the author asserts, unsigned and undated paintind was style of Ozias Humphery that Austen family hired him in the exctly peiod when Austen teenager. This point is contradicted by lecturer. He says, This portrait sold by in place which is not the place that Austen lived in that period. She have lived in london.
The passage and lecture are both discussing portrait which may or may not to Jane Austen. The passage claima three evidence which support idea that Jane Austen is a subject of portrait. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. He mentions all reasons mentioned in article are all inconvenience.
First, the author states, Austen'family itself has admitted the claim that the girl in the picture is Jane Austen. The professor refutes this notion. He says, Jane Auten dead before seventy years ago. Her relatives who said this picture to Austen never saw her before. They did not know how she look like justb from her sister painting.Therefor, they can not recognize if this portrait to her or not.
Second, the author points to painting that Austen sister did to Jane. This girls in the picture clearly resemble the girl in the portrait, also she look like girls in her family members. This statement is challenged by professor. He mentioned, Austen'family has a very large members. moreover many relatives girls like her neice who are resemble
Austen. That way this reason is unbelievable.
Finally, the author asserts, unsigned and undated paintind was style of Ozias Humphery that Austen family hired him in the exctly peiod when Austen teenager. This point is contradicted by lecturer. He says, This portrait sold by in place which is not the place that Austen lived in that period. She have lived in london.
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...e that Austen lived in that period. She have lived in london.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, may, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 239.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96234309623 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57099267332 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55230125523 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 21.2450331126 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.665963352 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.4210526316 110.228320801 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5789473684 21.698381199 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06452816374 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 4.19205298013 382% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41757459695 0.272083759551 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129984385392 0.0996497079465 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18804746477 0.0662205650399 284% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260120503375 0.162205337803 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.324418583277 0.0443174109184 732% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.3589403974 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.0289183223 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.6 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.7273730684 47% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.498013245 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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