The passage maintains that the selling of the rare as well as important fossils to private ownership cause various types of chaotic situation because it may harm various scientist as well as public. However, the lecturer is highly contentious with the ideas presented by the reading and lecturer posits that the importance of selling the various rare as well as important fossils to the private outweigh the importance than not selling it.
First of all, the reading passage asserts that rather than selling the various important fossils to private company if it is handed over to the various museum public can have easy access to see various types of historical fossils .As a result, the importance of the fossils can be maintained. However, the lecturer contends that instead of handing over the museum if sold to private company it is certain that there would be greater exposure .Indeed the fossils is available for sale at cheaper price which the schools and college can easily buy at minimal amount. In addition the people can have easy access. Evidently, this difference presented in the paragraph concludes that lecturer and author are not in agreement with each other regarding the exposure of fossils.
Secondly, the author believes that because of the trend of selling the fossils to private company various scientist that been studying the fossils meticulously may lose access to important fossils. As a result which may halt the discovery of the various types of extinct form. In addition, author also argues that the scientist cannot buy the fossils from the various fossils buyers at an exorbitant prices .On the contrary, the lecturer argues the idea presented by author regarding this subject matters . The lecturer maintains that the before selling the fossils to various buyers it must have been identified by the various scientist .Moreover, the scientist must have done the fossil test also before selling the fossils to the buyers. As a result of this scientist may not have lose important matters and information regarding the fossils. Consequently, this idea regarding the losing the private information of fossils are not in agreement with the idea presented by both author as well as lecturer.
Finally, author confess that it is because of the commercial fossils collector many information associated with the fossils are found to be destroyed. They found this type of job pretty cumbersome as well. As a result the documentation process seems to be irrelevant. On the other hand, the lecturer posits that it is because of the commercial fossils collector we are able to unearth the various undiscovered fossils .Indeed , we should not undermine the works of the various commercial fossils collector .Their deeds and contribution should be underlined and exalted.
In a Nutshell, Lecturer contends that selling the fossils is better idea however the author seems to be unwarranted with this idea. Both Lecturer as well as Author holds the conflicting views with this context .It is clear that they will have trouble finding common ground on this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 30.3222958057 204% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 5.01324503311 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2589.0 1373.03311258 189% => OK
No of words: 501.0 270.72406181 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16766467066 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.04702891845 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63155349777 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 145.348785872 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.383233532934 0.540411800872 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 785.7 419.366225166 187% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.0460289411 49.2860985944 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.833333333 110.228320801 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 21.698381199 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 7.06452816374 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 4.19205298013 716% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200761175096 0.272083759551 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747215238444 0.0996497079465 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550182179163 0.0662205650399 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124326754767 0.162205337803 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353766279618 0.0443174109184 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.3589403974 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 63.6247240618 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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