question 1 in tpo 36

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question 1 in tpo 36

The lecture and the reading passage are talking about the franchise. The reading passage states that it is good for new businesses to buy a franchise instead of starting a new business. On the other hand, the professor contradicts that by saying that the benefits of owning a franchise are put into question.

The reading passage mentions that there are already reliable suppliers, and the franchise contracts typically specify which suppliers are to be used. The lecturer opposed that by addressing that many franchises force the owners to buy very specific suppliers and goods which are overpricing. She also adds that if the equivalent goods and services are cheaper, it is not allowed for them to buy them.

The passage posits that another advantage of a franchise is that it can save new businesses a lot of money on advertising. The professor disagrees by pointing out that the franchise company takes 6% of the total sum of sales every year which is a lot and the company does the advertising but it is advertising for the company brand or product not for the owner and she illustrates that many are selling the same product not only the owner.

Finally, the reading passage agrees that a franchise offers more security than starting an independent business. On the contrary, the lecturer explains the franchise is not secure but it is less risky. The professor also explains that there is another option to start a business by buying an already existing business from a previous owner that will be successful as twice as a franchise.

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Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 11 12
No. of Words: 262 250
No. of Characters: 1260 1200
No. of Different Words: 123 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.023 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.809 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.637 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.892 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.401 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.637 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.12 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4