The reading and the lecture are both about wood companies who recieved a certification called ecocertified when they obtain the standards of saving and recycling materials . More specifically, in regard to the passage, the writer presents three theories about how these companies can attract people to buy their products. The lecturer disputes the claims made in the article. His position is that these reasons are not true because american companies take care of their reputation.
First and foremost, the author of the reading states Americans have not pay attension to this new lable because they think it is not valuable. The article mentions that consumers did not trust and advertising by firms. This argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that Americans do not treat all companies in the same way and they discern on independent companies. He points out that they tend to buy from one company if there is no competition in the market but, if there more companies they will make attension to them.
Secondly, the author suggests prices of these companies will be higher than the other corporations in the market because they are certificated. In the article it is said that people tend to purchase from lowest cost produts, so American companies will not sue this new strategy. Again, the professor specifically addresses this point when he states by gives a study that american care about price when only company in the market. He goes on to say that less than 5 percent of american will not choce the value of the price.
Finally, the author brings his argument to a close by suggesting that American companies care about busniess only inside the country which sufficint for them. Not surprisingly, the lecturer takes issue with this claim by contending that these companies need to pay attension to the other parts of the world. He notes that foreign firms can attack to the American market and take their consumers from them if they did not apply this new way.
- Robert E Peary was a well known adventurer and arctic explorer who in 1909 set out to reach the North Pole When he returned from the expedition he claimed to have reached the pole on April 7 1909 This report made him into an international celebrity 76
- Some parents offer their school age children money for each high grade mark they get in school Do you think this is a good idea 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Having children is less important than it was in the past Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Be sure to use your own words Do not use memorized examples 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure successful future 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ndards of saving and recycling materials . More specifically, in regard to the pas...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'from the lowest'.
Suggestion: from the lowest
...it is said that people tend to purchase from lowest cost produts, so American companies wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, in regard to, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 22.412803532 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1373.03311258 121% => OK
No of words: 334.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96407185629 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60202638788 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 145.348785872 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508982035928 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 419.366225166 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.536180463 49.2860985944 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06452816374 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.077763063554 0.272083759551 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285757995327 0.0996497079465 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417435754028 0.0662205650399 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553299428811 0.162205337803 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344887112605 0.0443174109184 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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