The article states that young reader nowadays are reading fewer literature books, and that has negative effects on public reading and the culture in general. However, the professor refutes each of the article points.
First of all, the reading avers that nothing except the literature can provide intellectual stimulation to the reader because literature exercises the imagination of the reader's brain. However, the professor says that it is not plausible to say that literature books only improve the imagination of the readers' mind. There are many books on other fields such as science and political books can enhance creativity and imagination. That's why; we can not assume that the literature books only that have a positive effect on the reader intellectuality.
Secondly, the reading claims that young people prefer reading self-help books, and these kinds of books are written with poor quality and superficially. Also, in the past, the literature readers were challenging each other with literature as a source of entertainment, but nowadays people have turned to the TV as a source of entertainment. However, the professor says that cultural valuable materials are not written. Culture practices have changed. There are many forms to express culture like music and novels,
Thirdly, the article states that in the past people used to give attention to the talented literature writer, but nowadays there are many talented writers with a low audience. However, the professor declares that we should not blame the readers because the writers are using difficult words in their writing and they are too hard to understand. Therefore, talented writers have few audiences because they are using out-dated words.
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- Integrated writing task. Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they oppose specific points made in the reading passage. 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...can enhance creativity and imagination. Thats why; we can not assume that the literat...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o express culture like music and novels, Thirdly, the article states that in the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, in general, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 270.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37037037037 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74782867266 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 419.366225166 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2355569886 49.2860985944 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193917770639 0.272083759551 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704888309651 0.0996497079465 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627846559102 0.0662205650399 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129168689724 0.162205337803 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468478647768 0.0443174109184 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.8541721854 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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