Sending humans to Mars.
The article is mainly about sending humans to mars. it provides three reasons that it is impossible to send humans to mars, at least these days. however, the professor explains that it may be possible to send humans to mars and refutes each of the author’s reasons.
First, the reading claims that traveling to mars takes so long, perhaps nearly two years. The cargo capacity of the spaceship will not allow it to carry enough food, water, and oxygen for two years. The professor refutes this point by saying that this problem is solvable. There is a kind of plant that grows in water instead of soil. Therefore, it is easy to cultivate and consume it during the journey. Moreover, by utilizing water-recycling methods, it is easy to provide the required water, and almost every plant does photosynthesis and converts carbon dioxide to oxygen.
Second, the article posits that the zero gravity of mars is the problem, and the human body cannot bear it for a long time. however, the professor says astronauts have been in the moon orbits for months with zero gravity. they know that they have to do some special exercises and consume specific vitamins and minerals, such as calcium, to prevent their muscle and bone densities from weakening.
Third, the reading says that the spaceship is exposed to dangerous solar radiation that harms humans. The professor opposes this by explaining that solar radiations are not always dangerous; however, it is avoidable to be exposed to them by using special instruments to monitor them and using light shelters whenever the instruments detect dangerous radiations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...is mainly about sending humans to mars. it provides three reasons that it is impos...
^^
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...nd humans to mars, at least these days. however, the professor explains that it may be ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'mar'.
Suggestion: mar
...t, the reading claims that traveling to mars takes so long, perhaps nearly two years...
^^^^
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...an body cannot bear it for a long time. however, the professor says astronauts have bee...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...on orbits for months with zero gravity. they know that they have to do some special ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, third, at least, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 267.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04868913858 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57108398618 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 145.348785872 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576779026217 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4412227191 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242814803931 0.272083759551 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856838431774 0.0996497079465 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128061391168 0.0662205650399 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154832511344 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.195830814828 0.0443174109184 442% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.