Shopping Centers
Both the reading passage and the lecture discuss the impact of shopping centers. The passage presents the advantages of shopping centers, opposed by the professor.
The passage states that shopping centers' constructions will create jobs for an area's local population. In fact, if shops are built, there will be a need of people to work in the sales, administration, and maintenance departments. The professor agrees that constructing shopping centers will generate job opportunities; however, she argued that the new jobs will not benefit the local population, for people who usually built shopping centers are strangers and likely to employ people from their nations.
The author of the passage claims that erecting shopping centers in an area will allow the development of other businesses. The professor casts doubts on this claim by arguing that small businesses are unlikely to evolve in the presence of a shopping center because people will not be eager to purchase in small market while there is a great center.
The reading passage argues that shopping centers will provide opportunity for diversity of product so that clients can purchase everything they want. The professor state that although shopping centers are great stores, they are not necessarily diverse. The professor explained that products in most shopping centers are also found in other markets, which is the opposite of diversity - a diverse shops have their own unique products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an area' or simply 'areas'?
Suggestion: an area; areas
...ters constructions will create jobs for an areas local population. In fact, if shops are...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...area will allow the development of other businesses. The professor casts doubts o...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...w the development of other businesses. The professor casts doubts on this claim by...
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Line 4, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...arket while there is a great center. The reading passage argues that shopping ce...
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Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ents can purchase everything they want. The professor state that although shopping ...
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Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ores, they are not necessarily diverse. The professor explained that products in mo...
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Line 4, column 398, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'shop'?
Suggestion: shop
...s the opposite of diversity - a diverse shops have their own unique products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 229.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37554585153 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73709033758 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550218340611 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6263968911 49.2860985944 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.1 110.228320801 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 7.06452816374 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.525708103216 0.272083759551 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.254388186775 0.0996497079465 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764018660287 0.0662205650399 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339687062887 0.162205337803 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913749996585 0.0443174109184 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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