"It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer."
A new shopping center is a progression of development and prospers neighborhood and it is expected to continue growing. I support the idea of building a new shopping mall center in my neighborhood because it would create a lot of job opportunities for unemployed people. And, also there are some advantages to creating a large shopping mall as there is a huge selection of products available in one space.
First of all, the opening of a shopping mall centre would make a significant impact on my neighbor’s creating more opportunities and benefits. For Instance, there might be few people who have not been able to find a job and they might have been struggling to pay their bills. Once the shopping mall is ready to start it up, they would offer many open positions where they would be required to hire unemployed people. Moreover, there would be a good chance for jobless people to apply to work in the shopping mall, and one benefit is that it would be closed to their house so they would not need to spend paying the parking space nor gas. Therefore, people without a job could afford to pay their bills on time and have the sense they can contribute to the growth of the community.
A good advantage of having a shopping mall nearby is the convenience it offers. Normally, there are different types of errands that have to be completed throughout the day, and to do so there are several businesses that are required to be visited to complete one's tasks. Such as mail centers, supermarkets, the dentist, pharmacies, etc. As an illustration, If someone needs to complete their errands in a short time, as a result, they would spend their whole day making a long drive into the city to be able to find what they need. Meanwhile, having a shopping mall nearby can enable one to get a lot done in a short time.
A good final reason for building a new shopping mall is that it will increase the values of the property of the zone. When the zone seems prosperous a lot of people are likely to invest in it because, in the long run, it would be satisfactory for them. Finally, it would create a good income for the neighborhood to continue growing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 5.04856512141 357% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1373.03311258 129% => OK
No of words: 386.0 270.72406181 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59585492228 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68999756037 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 145.348785872 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474093264249 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 419.366225166 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6321315212 49.2860985944 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.875 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 21.698381199 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113896513884 0.272083759551 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439023834942 0.0996497079465 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320211483192 0.0662205650399 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798283983091 0.162205337803 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377427850846 0.0443174109184 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 53.8541721854 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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