Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage
The article is about the behaviours of elephant and provides three reasons of support . However, the professor in the lecture refutes all points considering it unconvincing and challenges all the point mentioned in the reading passage.
Firstly, the reading avers that old elephants know that they are going to die soon and discoveries have confirm it. The professor in the lecture believes there are flaws in the author's position and oppose this point by saying there is a practical reason with increasing age there teeth become weak and chewing is so arduous. Moreover, they look for soft vegetation which is only available in water and they die in water. This area is called elephant graveyard. Thus, this point from the lecture is faulty.
Secondly, the author of the passage claims that elephants have artistic ability. In contrast, the professor refutes this point by indicating that elephants are trained to paint by humans. In addition, the ears are their sensitive part so humans strech them to train elephants which helps them to remember the pattern of paint brush in the trunk. They only draw the simple lines not a specific picture of plant or animal. Therefore, this point of lecture can be considered invalid.
Finally, the text outlines that elephants have a strong fear of mice. The professor says that this claim is problematic. He explains that they are not afraid from mice just unfamiliar with it and it is natural and the elephants lives in the zoo are not scared as they are familiar and do not feel any threat. Hence, this point of text cannot be supported by evidence.
It is quite visible that writer and author hold very different perspectives on elephant behavior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Use past participle here: 'confirmed'.
Suggestion: confirmed
... going to die soon and discoveries have confirm it. The professor in the lecture believ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...afraid from mice just unfamiliar with it and it is natural and the elephants live...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 285.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95789473684 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53813642951 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554385964912 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5835348816 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1176470588 110.228320801 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06452816374 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206956089052 0.272083759551 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685604353242 0.0996497079465 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654949147575 0.0662205650399 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110172739698 0.162205337803 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572431429773 0.0443174109184 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.3589403974 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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