Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage
The reading and lecture are both about the advancement in the transportation within the trade sector. The author of the reading states that container ships are old fashioned and companies are now introducing humanless cargo ships which is benefial for trade in many ways. The lecturer disagrees. He mentions crewless ships are more dangerous to operate and attacks each of the claim made in the article.
Firstly, the author begins by stating that ships generated by itself diminish the wages for labour. In addition, the sum for their fooding and lodging can aslo be removed eventually companies can be benefited. The professor believes there are flaws in the writer’s position. He contends nowadays there are ships available with few crews and having staffs in ship is very crucial for the inspection and maintainance for the obscure ravage that might occur while operating.
Secondly, according to the reading passage, humanless cargo are less likely to be attacked by the pirate. Additionally, ships including precious materails are suceptible to be steal by the outsiders and aid them to make enough money but having automatic ship could prevent from this awful situation. The speaker on hand points out that advanced level technology can detect each and everything about the ship such as where, how and when it is going. Morever, they can crash the ship with the assistance of guidance system.
Finally, the reading passage notes that cargo ships are contolled by the sensor and computer thus making it less volunerable to accident. Furthermore, even if uncertainty situation occur, they can react frequently and manage repair. The professor rebuts this argument. He puts forth the idea that once the ships are initiated towards its destination, it is very complex to change the course of direction. Therefore, in case of emergency it can immediately control its direction resulting more viable to get accident. In other hand, this won’t be the case with ship maintained by human as they can suspect and be ready for the future emergency.
As we can see, the author and lecturer holds very conflicting views on th advantages of autonomous ship. The speaker effectively challanges the writer’s argument.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ich is benefial for trade in many ways. The lecturer disagrees. He mentions crewles...
^^^
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion. The speaker on hand points out that advanced level technology can detect eac...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.01324503311 299% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1373.03311258 136% => OK
No of words: 358.0 270.72406181 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20391061453 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72271297489 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 145.348785872 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 419.366225166 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0925714503 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.15 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124095192369 0.272083759551 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382859127529 0.0996497079465 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341836757495 0.0662205650399 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067167068721 0.162205337803 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345927893702 0.0443174109184 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 63.6247240618 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ich is benefial for trade in many ways. The lecturer disagrees. He mentions crewles...
^^^
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion. The speaker on hand points out that advanced level technology can detect eac...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.01324503311 299% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1373.03311258 136% => OK
No of words: 358.0 270.72406181 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20391061453 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72271297489 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 145.348785872 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 419.366225166 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0925714503 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.15 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124095192369 0.272083759551 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382859127529 0.0996497079465 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341836757495 0.0662205650399 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067167068721 0.162205337803 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345927893702 0.0443174109184 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 63.6247240618 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.