Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage
The reading and lecture are both about the endotherms animal which are likely to be maintain their body temeprature regardless of the variance in climatic condition. The author of the reading states that since modern reptiles were not considered an endotherm, dinosaur too were not referred as endotherm. However, dinosaur were not analogous to modern reptile in some ways, now they were presumed to be endotherm. The lecturer disagrees. He mention there is no any evidence to prove dinosaur as an endotherm and attacks each of the claims made in the article.
Firstly, the author begins by stating that fossil found in polar domain can determine the dinosaur as endotherm since only animal which can maintain their tempereture stable could survive in such cold climate. The professor believes there are flaws in the writer’s position. He contends that back then the climate used to be warmer than today. So, with this climate they could easily survive in the polar. In addition, during winter they migrated to hot area or hibernated to shield themself from cooler temperature.
Secondly, according to the passage leg situated underneath rather than on sides and the effecient movement such as running is another major trait of endotherm. Besides, modern dinosaur had their leg positioned under their body elaborates they were endotherm. The speaker on other hand points out that in order to brace their weight they have had leg beneath their body. Furthermore, the more they could support their weight, they more they would grow in size. Therefore, leg position doesnot suppor the idea of dinosaur to be endotherm.
Finally, the reading passage notes that dinosaur had harvesian cannel which is directly connected with the physiolofy of endotherm. To be more precise, this cannel helped them to burgeon irrespective of any weather. The professor rebiuts this argument. He puts forth the idea that although they had harvesian cannel they too had growth ring which made their bone thick resulting slow growth during cooler climate. Moreover, the pattern of rapid growth followed by no or slow growth is not an indicator of endotherm.
As we can see the author and the lecturer holds very conflicting views on the dinosaur to be endotherms. Thee speaker effectively challenges the writer’s argument.
- Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage 85
- Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage 85
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 442, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
...e endotherm. The lecturer disagrees. He mention there is no any evidence to prove dinos...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 459, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...lecturer disagrees. He mention there is no any evidence to prove dinosaur as an en...
^^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d the effecient movement such as running is another major trait of endotherm. Bes...
^^
Line 4, column 464, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...the pattern of rapid growth followed by no or slow growth is not an indicator of e...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 30.3222958057 162% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1373.03311258 141% => OK
No of words: 372.0 270.72406181 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20430107527 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59563856822 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 145.348785872 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521505376344 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 419.366225166 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9418520734 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68181818182 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151237355419 0.272083759551 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442119351589 0.0996497079465 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321833200223 0.0662205650399 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797711059771 0.162205337803 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267649088145 0.0443174109184 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 63.6247240618 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 442, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
...e endotherm. The lecturer disagrees. He mention there is no any evidence to prove dinos...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 459, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...lecturer disagrees. He mention there is no any evidence to prove dinosaur as an en...
^^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d the effecient movement such as running is another major trait of endotherm. Bes...
^^
Line 4, column 464, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...the pattern of rapid growth followed by no or slow growth is not an indicator of e...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 30.3222958057 162% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1373.03311258 141% => OK
No of words: 372.0 270.72406181 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20430107527 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59563856822 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 145.348785872 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521505376344 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 419.366225166 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9418520734 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68181818182 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151237355419 0.272083759551 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442119351589 0.0996497079465 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321833200223 0.0662205650399 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797711059771 0.162205337803 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267649088145 0.0443174109184 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 63.6247240618 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.