The article states that edmontosaurus dinosaur survived the wintertime by migrating south to more hospital regions and provides three reasons of support. Conversely, the professor states that the article's hypotheseis is not convincing and she refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading claims that the edmontosaur's diet supports the migration hypotheseis since the dinosaur fed on plants that available in the south area during cold climate. The professor opposes this point by explaining that despite of the fact that edmontoaur feeding on plants, the dinosaur did not have have to migrate. Climate temperature in the north region was much more warmer in the past, so it creates a good growing conditions for different plant species during the summer period. She explains also, even after the plants died during the winter, the dinosaur could feed on these deadly nutrious plants.
Second, the article avers that the dinosaur lived in herd supports the migration hypothesis. The profesor, on the other hand, states that edmonsaurs does not have to migrate even if its herd. There are other reasons for the dinosaur to lived herds, such as, for extra protection from predators. The professor provides an example of rossevia elks, that inhabit forsts in the United states, lived in herds and not migrated.
Third, the reading posits that edmonosaurs were physcially capable of migrating long distances, because of reaching highly speeds up to 45 km/hr. The professor, however, disagrees with this point by saying this is true for mature dinosaurs, but juvenile dinosaures do not have the physical capability to move long distances. Since herd would not leave behind their juveniles in the harsh climate, the would not migrate to other places. For the reasons that these not premature dinosaure would not able to survive during wintertime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: have
...feeding on plants, the dinosaur did not have have to migrate. Climate temperature in the ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ng on plants, the dinosaur did not have have to migrate. Climate temperature in the ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'warmer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: warmer
...emperature in the north region was much more warmer in the past, so it creates a good growi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, if, second, so, third, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 295.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30847457627 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5788212179 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9172817477 49.2860985944 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06452816374 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387261809731 0.272083759551 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127380787097 0.0996497079465 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651935420923 0.0662205650399 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213517727613 0.162205337803 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568376632974 0.0443174109184 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.