Giving some logical reasons,the professor is defending the Chevalier memoir and making it reliable.She uses sophistications to make the critics convince that their claim on memoir is not true.
First of all,she mentions the issue about borrowing some money from a merchant by Chevalier.She thinks the Chevalier was in trouble with cash and he hadnt enough time to prepare it .He hadn't time to sell his own properties and estates to provide the money.so the loan is reasonable and it doesnt show his poverty.Secondly,the critics say that he escaped out the jail by bribing the watchman.But we know that there were more powerful men there in the jail with much more powerful friends and relations that made the escape so easir for them but they weren't able to escape.Therefor,we can accept what the Chevalier have said about the way he could manage to escape from the prison using a piece of metal and digging the ceiling.And the last reason the critics gives on unreliability of the Chevalier's memoir is that the details of the conversation between Chelavier and Voltaire is not truely mentioned in details in the Chelavier's memoir. They believe that there's a long period of time between the time they were conversing and the time Chelavier wrote that on paper.And it is impossible to write the exact talk that was occured at that time.However ,the professor solves the dillema easily.In his point of view,the Chevalier had a chance to get the tool due to the watchmen's come and go to repair the ceiling.
Overall the professor is trying to make his opinion seem to be true.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 268.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90298507463 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89309792328 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570895522388 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 21.2450331126 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 332.748027793 49.2860985944 675% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 328.5 110.228320801 298% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.0 21.698381199 309% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06452816374 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 4.19205298013 596% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179289104169 0.272083759551 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999356747679 0.0996497079465 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311119694446 0.0662205650399 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109263788337 0.162205337803 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391722269124 0.0443174109184 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.1 13.3589403974 263% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.93 53.8541721854 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.2 11.0289183223 256% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.42419426049 123% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.7273730684 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.498013245 274% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.2008830022 259% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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