TPO-03
The reading and the lecture are both about was the Dutch painters pinted by Rembrandt or not?. The author believes that Rembrandt was not the one who painted the portrait. The lecturer costs doubt on the claims made in the article. She thinks the portrait was painted by Rembrands.
First of all, the author points out that the dresess of the women was unsutible. IT is mentioned that Rembrandt was known for his attention, and the women was servant who could not afford to wear a luxurious fur collar. However, the lecturer challenges this point. She says the fur collar was painted on the top after 100 years since Rembrandt.
Secondly, the author contends that Rembtandt was a profissonal on pinting light and shasow, but in this portrait these elemnts do not get along. The article notes under the face of the women is dark ful collar, which would absorb light but do not reflect it. The professor suggests rebuts this argument. She suggests the portrait is very realastic.
Finally, the author states that examination the back of the painting reveals that it was painted on a paned made of many pieces of wood stiked together. However, rembrandt did not use evet a panel glued together in this way. In contrast, the lecturer says this happened because Rembrandt elarge the paining.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s not the one who painted the portrait. The lecturer costs doubt on the claims made...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, second, secondly, so, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 1373.03311258 79% => OK
No of words: 221.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89140271493 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40099724714 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570135746606 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 419.366225166 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5936323893 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0666666667 110.228320801 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 21.698381199 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06452816374 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.481138884517 0.272083759551 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151464130249 0.0996497079465 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101912083491 0.0662205650399 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289153327876 0.162205337803 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742883529651 0.0443174109184 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 53.8541721854 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.0289183223 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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