The main topic discussing in the paragraph and the lecture is whether dinosaurs were endothermic or not. Endothermic being has a capability to maintain its internal temperature irrespective of the environment. The paragraph shows couple of examples to proof that in spite of being a reptiles, dinosaurs were endothermic. Contrary to this opinion, lecture casts doubt on the endothermic nature of the dinosaurs.
The paragraph provides a reason for endothermic nature of dinosaurs is polar dinosaurs. It states that fossils of dinosaurs are found in the polar region and only living being can sustain polar temperature which is able to maintain temperature above climate. The lecture cast doubt on the reason and says that first of all polar regions were warmer in their time in compare to today's condition and secondly it could be the possibility of the dinosaurs to migrate from the polar region during cold season or they could go on hibernation during critical time.
Second reason states in paragraph about the leg position and movement of the dinosaurs. The legs of the dinosaurs were underneath its body, not outside like other reptiles. Whereas lecture tells that dinosaurs were high energy animals which helped them to run fast and dinosaurs were large animals which stated legs position were to support more weight of the body.
The paragraph shows that harvesian canals are found in the fossils of the dinosaurs which helps in the growing of the body rapidly. Rapid growth signifies endothermic in nature. Casting doubt on the reason about harvesian canals, lecture states that growth rings are also found in the fossils of dinosaurs and evidence shows that growth of the dinosaurs were in period means rapidly slowly and rapidly. It depends on the climatic condition of the environment. This is against the growth capability of the endothermic species.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: THE_NN_AND_THE_NN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'are'?
Suggestion: are
...ussing in the paragraph and the lecture is whether dinosaurs were endothermic or n...
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Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a reptile' or simply 'reptiles'?
Suggestion: a reptile; reptiles
...xamples to proof that in spite of being a reptiles, dinosaurs were endothermic. Contrary t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'whereas', 'first of all', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.299065420561 0.261695866417 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.146417445483 0.158904122519 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0872274143302 0.0723426182421 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0311526479751 0.0435111971325 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0249221183801 0.0277247811725 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.158878504673 0.128828473217 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0249221183801 0.0370669169778 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68368239951 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0249221183801 0.0208969081088 119% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.115264797508 0.128158765124 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00934579439252 0.0158828679856 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.01246105919 0.0114777025283 109% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1864.0 1645.83664459 113% => OK
No of words: 302.0 271.125827815 111% => OK
Chars per words: 6.17218543046 6.08160592843 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.04852973271 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.390728476821 0.374372842146 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.291390728477 0.287516216867 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208609271523 0.187439937562 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.149006622517 0.113142543107 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68368239951 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453642384106 0.539623497131 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.0474286285 53.8517498576 82% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0529801325 115% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1333333333 21.7502111507 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3087083684 49.3711431718 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.266666667 132.220823453 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 21.7502111507 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.878197800319 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.39072847682 59% => OK
Readability: 49.272406181 50.5018328374 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.38461538462 1.90840788429 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.599378121639 0.549887131256 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.160962153579 0.142949733639 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0531359205417 0.0787303798458 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.633873567491 0.631733273073 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152065680506 0.139662658121 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.297943301628 0.266732575781 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100882953516 0.103435571967 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.462928847293 0.414875509568 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0510000853199 0.0530846634433 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.471305195321 0.40443939384 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361920534288 0.0528353158467 68% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.26048565121 141% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.2958057395 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.