The reading passage and the lecture are both the decreasing population of birds and it's causes in the urban areas of United States. The author of the passage explains that, there is declination period of birds now-a-days in America, which is mainly due to the human beings and their agriculture advancements. While the professor casts doubt claims made in the article. He thinks that,in actual, human controls their methods of cropping, rather than to destroying other species.
first, the article describes that, in modern life, many new constructions are held in the country, to promote marvelous way of living and better food to the people. In turn, they are simply disaster for the bird's community, more the commercial area, becoming less the wild habitat. However, the lecturer points out that, there are recent studies about the birds and researchers shows the increase level of street pigeons, owls and hawks as well, Thus, this is not so true.
Second, the reading passage contends that, coverage area for the agriculture purpose, using by the public, just vanishing the environment for the wildlife, no natural place or habitat would be found. However, the speaker rebuts this argument, he says that, according to new studies, it is shown that, in this homeland, there is annually lowest percentages for the purpose of crops. Hence, it is prof wrong.
Lastly, the author states that, the usage of hazardous chemical, these bird's species also facing the effects of dangerous reactions, like: by taking the nutrition from insects and interacting the water. On the other hand, the professor posits that, by introducing the naturally resistant genes in crops to avoid these kinds of pesticides. So, now no need for further addition of chemicals to the agriculture land.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ngs and their agriculture advancements. While the professor casts doubt claims made i...
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Line 1, column 384, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...aims made in the article. He thinks that,in actual, human controls their methods of...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...er than to destroying other species. first, the article describes that, in modern ...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'annually the lowest'.
Suggestion: annually the lowest
... shown that, in this homeland, there is annually lowest percentages for the purpose of crops. H...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, lastly, second, so, thus, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 289.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17301038062 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57684892482 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626297577855 0.540411800872 116% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 2.5761589404 349% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8920403581 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224683776204 0.272083759551 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747749395839 0.0996497079465 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612398635595 0.0662205650399 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132127241842 0.162205337803 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266208547732 0.0443174109184 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.42419426049 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 63.6247240618 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.