TPO 22- integrated
Both the reading and lecture discuss about Ethanol fuel as an alternative for gasoline. While the author believes that Ethanol is not a good replacement for gasoline, the professor is disagree with the idea and refutes every reason that has been given in the reading passage.
First, the reading states that Ethanol won't solve the problem of global warming cause it releases carbon dioxide as well as gasoline. However, the lecture opposes that by saying although Ethanol releases co2, but this Ethanol will be produced from plants such as corn. So the co2 emitted by using Ethanol as a fuel will be removed during the process of growing a plant.
Second, the author argues that using Ethanol will reduce the amount of plants available for other uses, including animal food. The professor contradicts that by saying that Ethanol can be produced using celluloz that can be derived out of the parts of a plant that are not eaten by animals.
Third, the reading passage discusses that Ethanol can’t compete with gasoline in terms of price. The lecture finds this reason unconvincing and states that Ethanol can compete with gasoline in price terms in future. the professor continues his argument by illustrating an economic rule which is: the increase in production will reduce the cost and if the production of Ethanol increases in future, the price will drop without the help of the government. He also states if the production of Ethanol multiplyes three times, the price will drop by forty percent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...lacement for gasoline, the professor is disagree with the idea and refutes every reason ...
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Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...an compete with gasoline in price terms in future. the professor continues his argument b...
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Line 4, column 221, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...with gasoline in price terms in future. the professor continues his argument by ill...
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Line 4, column 392, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... if the production of Ethanol increases in future, the price will drop without the help o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, third, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 251.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01593625498 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44292315184 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521912350598 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4785799205 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.454545455 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06452816374 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.485061433917 0.272083759551 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202637267028 0.0996497079465 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504458617062 0.0662205650399 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293293885789 0.162205337803 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485183466062 0.0443174109184 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.