The passage and lecture both discuss three assumptions around in crazy cold temperature in many parts of the world. The reading section provides three supports to hold up the hypothesis of decreasing temperature during short Ice age. In contrast the professor states that the justifications of text are not convincing and demonstrates three counterarguments.
Firstly, the author posits that before ice age there was warm weather which might cause melting glaciers and lead to fresh water.Therefore, that cold freshwater affects ocean climate. However, the lecture denies this idea and mentions that this event happened only in Europe and North America. But we cannot see this issue in New zealand and South Africa.
Secondly, the article indicates that Volcanic euroption may send Sulfur gas and dark clouds of dust in to air. In other words, these dark played a role of obstacles between Earth and Sun. Consequently, this can decrease the global temperatures. In the contrary, the speaker refutes this and claims that it should have visual effect to be visible for poeple that are around. plus, sonow should be brown instead of seeming white. In fact, ther are no reports of these evidence. So it would not be that much strong.
Thirdly, the reading part claims that decreasing human population affect the forest lands. Since trees grow more and more, as a result the absorb cabon dioxide and it leads to decreasing green house effect which keeps the Earth warm. In contrast, the audio part rejects this and points out that lack of time could not let the forest trees grow because they need long time to rise. For instace, he provided an example of crops and other plants that grow in long terms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...ng temperature during short Ice age. In contrast the professor states that the justifica...
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Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...elting glaciers and lead to fresh water.Therefore, that cold freshwater affects ocean cli...
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Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'affects'' or 'affect's'?
Suggestion: affects'; affect's
...h water.Therefore, that cold freshwater affects ocean climate. However, the lecture den...
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Line 4, column 375, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Plus
... be visible for poeple that are around. plus, sonow should be brown instead of seemi...
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Line 6, column 136, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e trees grow more and more, as a result the absorb cabon dioxide and it leads to decreasin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, in contrast, in fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 284.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01408450704 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.547972577 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 145.348785872 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644366197183 0.540411800872 119% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2885695273 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7647058824 110.228320801 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 7.06452816374 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293745588009 0.272083759551 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699614683076 0.0996497079465 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063116989024 0.0662205650399 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145344262432 0.162205337803 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032126258094 0.0443174109184 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.