TPO 32
The reading specifies that submarines who patrolling in the North Atlantic and Arctic Ocean hear strange sounds and provide three theories about what might have caused the odd sounds. However, the professor say that author's theories have certain problems and introduce three reasons and refute them all.
First of all, the reading assert that the strange sounds is produce by male and female orca. In fact, the orca live in that area and use this sound to attract male. Nevertheless, the speaker opposes this idea reasoning that orca population do not live in a deep water. Therefore, the sumarines who are in a deep water cannot hear their sounds and also sonar can detect the orca noise.
Second, based on the reading, giand squids are responsible for quack noises and the reason the sonar cannot detect them is because they have soft bodies with no skeleton. Moreover, giant squids are intelligent animal and it is plausible they have the ability to emit wierd sound. In contrast, the professor states that the strange noises disappear after a time and giant squids still living in that area and it is not rational for submarine to think this sounds suddenly stops. Therefore, if the source of quckers was the squid, it would have been continued thereafter.
Third, according to the reading, foreign submarine from other countries patrolling the area and unintentionally they emit sounds. Conversely, the lecturer contradicts this point by saying that the strange sounds move around and change direction rapidly. Submarine do not have technology to alter their direction quickly and also they do not have silence engine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 255, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'deep water'.
Suggestion: deep water
...ing that orca population do not live in a deep water. Therefore, the sumarines who are in a ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...the reason the sonar cannot detect them is because they have soft bodies with no skeleton....
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, third, in contrast, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 267.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0936329588 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4629448134 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1245380389 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.615384615 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06452816374 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470655313754 0.272083759551 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159676217786 0.0996497079465 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725440736926 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26940352494 0.162205337803 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677839712807 0.0443174109184 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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